Setting Description Entry: Urban Street

Sights

cars, trucks, SUVs, bicycles, delivery trucks, pedestrians, homeless people, stray dogs, pavement, reflectors, sidewalks, cigarette butts on the ground, litter, broken glass, concrete medians, street lights, small trees with fences around them, street signs…

Sounds

honking, tires screeching, alarms going off, cars speeding by or slowing down, wheels bumping over reflectors, shoes clacking/slapping against pavement, whirr of bicycle tires, voices talking/shouting/laughing, cell phones ringing, car doors slamming, store doors…

Smells

exhaust, gas fumes, rubber, hot pavement, cigarette smoke, garbage, urine, food smells from restaurants and corner vendors, sweat, incense/potpourri/fragrance from nearby shops, sewage, old water in rain puddles

Tastes

foods: hot dogs/pretzels/soda/hamburgers/french fries/bottled water, smoky exhaust, bitter cigarettes, paper butts, soda straws, sweat, rain

Touch

gritty pavement, heat coming off the concrete, slap of shoes against sidewalk, sweat trickling, breeze blowing your hair/clothes, metallic fence under your fingers, wind from passing cars, uneven sidewalk, brick/stucco/concrete buildings, cold doorknobs…

Helpful hints:–The words you choose can convey atmosphere and mood.

Example 1: Snow dusted the gutters and the trash they contained with a humpy white blanket. It drifted down from the street lights–I swear, it jingled as it fell. Gone were the gasoline and greasy food smells; the air tasted clean, as if it had just been loosed upon the world.

–Similes and metaphors create strong imagery when used sparingly.

Example 1: (Simile) Music concussed from one vehicle after another like warring DJs in a night club.

Think beyond what a character sees, and provide a sensory feast for readers

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10 Responses to Setting Description Entry: Urban Street

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  2. Mary Witzl says:

    I liked the clean air too — wish we had more of that here; it’s cold right now, but it is as clean and crisp as it could be.

    I’ve been revising and my characters are indeed rolling their eyes and sighing far too much. I may be visiting here a lot more…

    Happy New Year!

  3. Thanks girls you are awesome.

  4. Becca says:

    Thanks, Christy!

    Yeah, it’s probably about an hour for me, too. the hardest ones are the places I haven’t been, or haven’t visited in a long time. Since I’m fairly sure Angela hasn’t been to the rainforest, either, that one should be a little sparse. 🙂

  5. C.R. Evers says:

    You never cease to amaze me! Another great list!

    Christy

  6. Angela says:

    Becca’s probably faster than me…maybe an hour? I struggle on the similies and metaphors. Some days they come, bam, just like that, other times…I have to yank them out of the imaginative ooze.

  7. GutsyWriter says:

    Hi guys,

    You really don’t waste time getting back to business. Thanks for amazing descriptions. How long does it take you to make these lists?

  8. PJ Hoover says:

    Nice! I can use this TODAY in my revisions!

  9. Becca says:

    Thanks, Marian! Clean air–sad to think that some day we may need a record of it to remind us what it was really like.

  10. Marian says:

    There are some lovely turns of phrase here. I especially like, “the air tasted clean, as if it had just been loosed upon the world.” That’s exactly what clean, crisp winter air feels like.

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