Setting Description Entry: Water Slide Park

Sight

chain link fence around the grounds, colored tubes and slides standing/twisting high in the air, staircases, water dripping from rides, puddles of water everywhere, lifeguard stands, flags flying, wet patrons in swim suits, towels, wave pool packed with people, inner…

Sounds

bodies moving swiftly through tubes/down slides, screams, laughter, conversation, parents yelling, kids crying, water dripping/splattering/splashing, staircases creaking, feet slapping on the pavement, feet splashing through puddles, piped-in music, wind whipping…

Smells

chlorine, bleach, water, sunblock, suntan oil, wet bathing suits and towels, food smells (hamburgers, fries, hot dogs, pizza, nachos), bubblegum, bug repellent, mildew

Tastes

chlorinated water, sweat, sunblock, oil, hamburgers, fries, hot dogs, pizza, nachos, gum, bottled water, soda, candy bars, ice cream

Touch

pavement burning your feet, jumping from puddle to puddle to keep soles of feet from burning, slap of concrete against running feet, chafe of wet bathing suit, wedgie from big huge slide, water in your eyes, wet hair sticking to your neck, sunburn, sticky feel of…

Helpful hints:

–The words you choose can convey atmosphere and mood.

Example 1: I ran up the steep stairs behind Matt, ignoring how the gritty non-slip strips on the steps cut into my feet. Sure, they’d be sore tomorrow, but today all I cared about was getting in as many runs as I could on the Gut Buster. Both Matt and I planned on beating our previous summer’s record of forty trips down the triple diamond rated water slide…

–Similes and metaphors create strong imagery when used sparingly.

Example 1: (Simile) At the top, the green light flashed. Sean gave me the thumbs up and then threw himself into the rushing water like a thrill seeking body surfing down a waterfall…

Think beyond what a character sees, and provide a sensory feast for readers

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6 Responses to Setting Description Entry: Water Slide Park

  1. Becca says:

    This was a fun one; having lived most of my life in Florida, the water park was my annual summer getaway. Oh, the memories :).

  2. Kelly says:

    What a fun one!

  3. Excellent blog. Generous wealth of information you share with us. Well done. Congratulations.

  4. Mary Witzl says:

    Dear God — I HATE water slides, and my kids tormented me by insisting that I go on them… I swear this post made my hands sweat!

    I love all the detail here: I’d totally forgotten about that farting sound almost-empty ketchup bottles make. And the smell of french fries wafting through chlorine-scented air…

  5. Windsong says:

    Thanks for the list! Brings back some very happy memories. 😀

  6. PJ Hoover says:

    For some reason, this setting brings Scooby Doo to mind 🙂

    Thanks!

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