Setting Thesaurus Entry: House Party

Sight

Crowded hallways, people sitting on the stairs, beer cans/bottles left on tables, blasting stereo, haze from cigarettes/pot, decorative lighting, cheesy decorations, line ups for the bathrooms, people crowding onto couches, chairs, dancing, groups standing around the pool table or Foosball table, bowls of chips, pretzels, popcorn strewn about, steady traffic to…

SoundsLoud music, laughing, yelling, shouting, crying, screaming, arguing, glass breaking, smoke alarm going off, doors opening closing, beer bottles on the fridge door clinking together every time it’s opened/shut, glasses thumping onto the table, drunken whooping, the click of pool balls hitting each other and shuttering into pockets, cries of indignation of…

Smells

Spilled beer, hair products, perfume, aftershave, alcohol, spicy chips, fresh microwaved popcorn, pizza, pot, cigarette smoke, vomit, sweat, beer breath

Tastes

Alcohol, pop, water, cigarettes, pot, gum, mints, chips, popcorn, pretzels, pizza, beer, coolers

Touch

Sticky counters, crunchy chips under foot, the poke of stepping on a beer cap against the heel, bumping, pushing, shoving, shoulder sliding together as you pass someone on the stair or tight hallway, feeling an anonymous pinch or grope in a crowded room, hugging drunk people, brushing up against others as you dance in a crowded space, a cool beer…

Helpful hints:

–The words you choose can convey atmosphere and mood.

Example 1: I staggered down the hallway, bumping into people and mumbling apologies until I reached the bathroom. I squinted, but it didn’t help my focus. No matter how hard I tried, there were three doorknobs on the bathroom door. “I’ll take number two, Alex,” I slurred, honing in on the middle one…

–Similes and metaphors create strong imagery when used sparingly.

Example 1: (Metaphor) Out on the back deck, the joint passed from hand to hand, a single demonic eye moving through the shadows…

Think beyond what a character sees, and provide a sensory feast for readers

Logo-OneStop-For-Writers-25-smallSetting is much more than just a backdrop, which is why choosing the right one and describing it well is so important. To help with this, we have expanded and integrated this thesaurus into our online library at One Stop For Writers. Each entry has been enhanced to include possible sources of conflict, people commonly found in these locales, and setting-specific notes and tips, and the collection itself has been augmented to include a whopping 230 entries—all of which have been cross-referenced with our other thesauruses for easy searchability. So if you’re interested in seeing a free sample of this powerful Setting Thesaurus, head on over and register at One Stop.

The Setting Thesaurus DuoOn the other hand, if you prefer your references in book form, we’ve got you covered, too, because both books are now available for purchase in digital and print copies. In addition to the entries, each book contains instructional front matter to help you maximize your settings. With advice on topics like making your setting do double duty and using figurative language to bring them to life, these books offer ample information to help you maximize your settings and write them effectively.

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About ANGELA ACKERMAN

Angela is an international speaker and bestselling author who loves to travel, teach, empower writers, and pay-it-forward. She also enjoys dreaming up new tools and resources for One Stop For Writers, a library built to help writers elevate their storytelling.
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12 Responses to Setting Thesaurus Entry: House Party

  1. Pingback: Setting Thesaurus Entry Collection | WRITERS HELPING WRITERS

  2. Sherry Soule says:

    This so helpful! I can’t wait for you guys to create a “setting Thesaurus” book!

    ~Sherry
    If you have a minute, check out my books!

  3. I love this! I actually do this for myself, so cool to know others do the same and I’m not alone!

  4. I’m glad I found your blog. Writers need to get inside their characters’ heads to experience all that they’re experiencing. If we don’t get and incorporate these kinds of details, our stories will be one-dimensional.

  5. Matthew Rush says:

    Not much specific to say about this as your post is awesome at a level equal to all your other posts – as usual.

    I do love the simile about the party goers worshiping the keg. I can remember feeling that way a little bit in high school; thinking that beer and liquid courage were the only way I could talk to girls.

  6. I’m revising a party scene so thanks a lot for this!

  7. really helpful!! Thanks

  8. Karen Lange says:

    Wow, this brings some interesting images…Thanks, as always, for sharing.
    Happy weekend,
    Karen

  9. Mmmm – this party smells great! Brings me back to the good old days. LOL.

  10. K.Hinny says:

    Thanks for the post! It was great!!

  11. I think it’s been too long since I last told you that you’re BRILLIANT! If you could only keep one blog as a writing resource, it would be yours. 🙂

  12. Bish Denham says:

    Wow, great post! I was like, you know, there!

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