Character Trait Entry: Brave

Definition: fearlessness in the face of adversity or danger

Characters in Literature: Batman; Captain America; Lan Mandragoran & Galad Damordred  (The Wheel of Time); Nevile Longbottom (Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows); Rambo

Common Portrayals: Soldiers, Policemen, Firemen, Superheroes, Warriors, Hunters

Cliches to Avoid:  the hero who is so brave he is blind to the corruption of the people he works for; the brave hero with a secret death wish; the superhero whose resulting fame causes egotism & the eventual ‘fall from grace/comeuppance’ as a result

Twists on the Traditional Brave:  

  • We see a lot of ‘brave’ but not ‘smart’ characters. Give us a character who is both!

  • Bravery is acting without fear, courage is acting despite fear. Think of the saying, ‘to fear is to live’.  A complex twist on a brave character would be to have them feel something is missing because they do not feel fear.

  • Bravery does not have to equate into a character who is big and strong or physically fit. Show us a character who is naturally brave, but his body is compromised, yet rather than have to ‘prove himself’, he naturally has respect of the people around him.

Build a worthy protagonist with a mix of unique strengths that will help him overcome obstacles and achieve meaningful goals.

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19 Responses to Character Trait Entry: Brave

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  2. Truer words were never spoken– Brave but Stupid doesn’t play-
    It’s acting when you don’t want to–THAT’s a real hero. And Neville has ALWAYS been one of my VERY favorite characters of all time!

  3. Biddy Fraser says:

    A lot of food for thought here. And loved that picture of Gandalf! It is Gandalf?

  4. The character trait list is getting awesomely long. And by the time I’m ready to edit my first draft, you might have added some new ones that are better for some of my characters than what I originally came up with. 🙂

  5. Nicole says:

    Love that you mention Lan and Galad. 🙂

  6. Great breakdown, Angela! Especially love that last bit of advice showing ways to revamp the cliches.

  7. Brave and smart, a deadly combo!

  8. I think Sylvester Stallone was brave for doing that last Rambo movie. And I think Angela was brave for using a Rambo 2008 stillshot pic of a super studly one from First Blood.

    #drooly

    *shakes head at Angela*

  9. Leslie Rose says:

    Brave and smart! I’m going to have to nominate Dr. Who. No matter what dangers he faces in the universe, he is always brave and compassionate.

  10. Heather says:

    I love this, especially the part about how you said bravery doesn’t mean the character has to be big and strong. So true, look at Katniss after all.

  11. Love this type of character. I’ve tried to make my hero both brave and smart.

  12. Susan Fields says:

    “Bravery is acting without fear, courage is acting despite fear” – I never thought of that distinction before. Very interesting!

  13. R. E. Hunter says:

    You’re welcome, Angela. These things always jump out at me, I don’t look for them (I think it’s part of my Asperger’s). If you ever need proofreading, let me know. I don’t do it professionally (and my time is limited), but maybe I could trade it for some future help on my novel, if I ever get that far. 8^)

  14. Good catch, R.E! Thanks!

  15. R. E. Hunter says:

    Thanks, another great post.

    Allow me one little nitpick: in the Causes paragraph, I believe you should have e.g. in brackets (meaning “for example”), not i.e. (meaning “in other words”), as you’re giving an example, not an alternate definition.

  16. Great post. I love the twists–especially the brave person who isn’t so physically able to actualize the braveness.

  17. Bish Denham says:

    Bravery has a lot to do with doing even when you are afraid.

  18. I like the definitions separating courage from bravery.

  19. Jemi Fraser says:

    Love that you included Neville – my favourite kind of brave! 🙂

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