Using a Critique Checklist, or, How Not to Look Like a Twit

When writers ask me for advice, the first thing I emphasize is the importance of finding a critique group or partners. These support systems are invaluable for adding the objectivity we lack and helping us see where our work needs work. They also provide an opportunity to share our knowledge with others—though many writers may struggle with this, especially when reading or hearing a more experienced author’s work.

editFrom time to time, I have this problem—not so much with the technical stuff like grammar and typos and such, but with the big picture items. When a really talented author reads an excerpt at my face-to-face group, I might think that it’s wonderful. Astonishingly brilliant. Then someone else mentions a problem they noticed and I think, Wow, that’s totally true. How’d I miss that?

Out of a desire to a) help my fellow writers, and b) not sit there feeling like a twit, I started a list of observations that I frequently hear at critique group. Then I turned the observations into questions. Now, when I’m hearing a piece that’s so good I can’t pick out any problems, I consult my checklist. Many times, I’m able to identify a weak area from among these possibilities:

Overall Story Issues: 

  • Is the story problem clear?
  • Is the voice realistic and consistent?
  • Does the voice sound right for the author’s target audience? (Too young? Too old?)
  • Does the chosen point of view (first, close third, omniscient, etc.) create the right level of intimacy or distance for the story?
  • Are there tantalizing questions, or is everything being explained along the way?
  • Has the story started in the right place?
  • Does the character’s situation continue to worsen, or is the author letting him off the hook and breaking tension?

Scene Issues: 

  • What does the character want in this scene?
  • What’s the conflict?
  • Does the character’s emotion change or remain the same throughout the scene? Are the descriptions multi-sensory, or primarily visual?
  • Is too much information being shared? Can some of it be revealed later?
  • Does the scene move the story forward? (Is it necessary?)
  • Does the scene go on too long? Should it end earlier? Be split in two?

Pacing Issues: 

  • Is the pace dragging anywhere?
  • Does a given section feel like it’s gone on for too long and should be condensed?
  • Is there too much narrative?
  • Too much telling?
  • Too much backstory?

Character Issues: 

  • Is there enough character emotion?
  • Is the character well-rounded? Flawed?
  • Is the dialogue realistic?
  • Is the character consistent in his speech, actions, and responses to stimuli?
  • Does the character evoke reader empathy in some way?

The beauty of a list like this is that while it works well for critiquing others, it also works on my own writing. When critiquers admit that their attention is drifting, I look at the Scene Issues to see if any of them are to blame. If someone isn’t connecting with my character, I edit with the Character Issues in mind. And when I’m reading my own work and I get that niggly feeling that something is off, I can usually find the problem on this list.

If you think something like this might be beneficial for you, take note of the suggestions being made at your critique group or by your individual partners and jot them down. Better yet, print out this list and add to it. And please share your knowledge in the comments section by adding any of the questions that you like to ask when critiquing; I’d love to flesh out my list.

What other problems do you frequently find, in your own writing or in the pieces you critique?

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About BECCA PUGLISI

Becca Puglisi is an international speaker, writing coach, and bestselling author of The Emotion Thesaurus and its sequels. Her books are available in five languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. She is passionate about learning and sharing her knowledge with others through her Writers Helping Writers blog and via One Stop For Writers—a powerhouse online library created to help writers elevate their storytelling. You can find Becca online at both of these spots, as well as on Facebook and Twitter.
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40 Responses to Using a Critique Checklist, or, How Not to Look Like a Twit

  1. Andrea Mack says:

    I love this list! It’s going to be so helpful with my revision-in-progress!

  2. Fantastic list! Thank you. I’ve needed this without ever realizing it until now. 🙂

    In a workshop on scene structure at NJ SCBWI earlier in June, Laurie Calkhoven reminded us that every scene should have an arc, just like the book. There should be dialogue/action, conflict, a climax, resolution, and an exit line. Comparing the first and last line of a scene helps you realize if the scene works.

  3. Excellent! Thank you 🙂 I’m an escapist reader and I have a difficult time picking anything apart in anyone else’s writing, so this is going to be invaluable!

  4. I’m so behind in reading blogs…but this is a wonderful list that I’m going to be referring to over and over again. Thank you!!

  5. Laura Murray says:

    This is SO helpful, not only for critique groups, but also my own writing! I love your blog – thanks! Becca – hope all is well with you – I have recommended the Emotional Thesaurus to so many writer friends after getting it at the last Miami SCBWI conference!

  6. I guess this sort of fits with the voice being consistent but I notice some authors I’ve critted switching the tenses of their sentences. It’s a bit annoying to read a few paragraphs in past tense then read in present and then go back to past.

    So I think I would expand a bit on the voice being consistent question just for my own reference.

  7. Sherry Ellis says:

    Very helpful advise!

  8. Great list! I’m going to put it to good use on my own manuscripts. Hope you don’t mind, I just linked to it from a post on my blog.

  9. Jemi Fraser says:

    That’s an awesome checklist! Thanks 🙂

  10. Another great tip from The Bookshelf Muse. Thanks, Becca!

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