Critiques 4 U! March Edition

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CONTEST CLOSED!

I hope that Spring is springing wherever you are. This winter has been a hard one for many, so I’ll refrain from complaining about how the air has been on in my house for two weeks now and our eight-month Summer has already begun. No one wants to hear that. Least of all me.

What you DO want to hear is that IT’S CRITIQUE TIME again! If you’re working on a first page and would like some objective feedback, leave a comment that includes: 

1) your email address

2) the working title of your WIP

3) its genre (no erotica, please)

4) the intended audience

ONLY ENTRIES THAT FOLLOW THESE INSTRUCTIONS WILL BE CONSIDERED.

3 commenters’ names will be drawn and posted tomorrow. If you win, you can email me your first page and I’ll offer my feedback. Best of luck!

About BECCA PUGLISI

Becca Puglisi is an international speaker, writing coach, and bestselling author of The Emotion Thesaurus and its sequels. Her books are available in five languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. She is passionate about learning and sharing her knowledge with others through her Writers Helping Writers blog and via One Stop For Writers—a powerhouse online library created to help writers elevate their storytelling. You can find Becca online at both of these spots, as well as on Facebook and Twitter.
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59 Responses to Critiques 4 U! March Edition

  1. Alrighty, everyone. The winners for this month’s contest are:

    Chrissie,
    Yanicke Forfang, and
    Sunni

    Thanks for entering! I’ll see you in April :).

  2. So sorry you’ve had to deal with harsh weather. We’re sunny in California but desperately in need of rain.

    Email: author@kathrynjankowskibooks.com
    Title: Perun’s Wrath
    Genre: fantasy
    Audience: Young Adult

    Thanks for the opportunity. Best of luck to all!

  3. email: sugarlaw13@live.com
    Title: Bayou Justice
    Genre: Crime Fiction/Thriller
    Intended Audience: Adults

    Thank you for this wonderful opportunity!

  4. Email: shundayah(at)gmail.com
    Title: A Nightmare’s Betrayal
    Genre: Portal Fantasy
    Audience: YA

  5. Dylan Jones says:

    Edit: Email: jones (dot) dylan19 (at) yahoo (dot) com

    Title: Fighting the Three Kingdoms

    Genre: Historical-Fiction

    Audience: YA

  6. Super awesome opportunity! Thank you!

    1. krista.n.quintana@gmail.com
    2. The Orphans of Jadox
    3. Fantasy Romance
    4. YA

  7. I’m delighted that it’s finally spring. It’s time to plant my garden.
    augustina@augustinavanhoven.com
    A Second Chance
    Time Travel
    Adult

  8. Ellen Pridmore says:

    email: elpridmore@comcast.net

    Title: Range Rovers
    Genre: Fiction – Picture Book
    Audience: Ages 4-8

    Thank you for the opportunity!

  9. CR Carter says:

    E-mail: crcarter@iserv.net
    Title: Infinity’s Discovery
    Genre: Fantasy
    Audience: Adult

    Thank you.

  10. Elizabeth Foster says:

    email: e.foster3@bigpond.com
    Title: Esme’s Wish
    Genre: Light fantasy
    Audience: YA

  11. Anita says:

    Email: ae (dot) siraki (at) yahoo (dot) com
    Title: The Wolf’s Grave
    Genre: Urban Fantasy
    Audience: Adults

    Thanks for the opportunity!

  12. Alana says:

    1) alana.j.mag@gmail.com
    2) (after)life lessons
    3) Fantasy
    4) Young adult

    Thank you!

  13. Email: vtowersauthor@gmail.com
    Title: Shui Gui;A Water Ghost Novel
    Genre: Paranormal, Thriller
    Audience: Young Adult, New Adult

  14. R. E. Hunter says:

    Email: r (dot) e (dot) hunter2012 (at) gmail (dot) com
    Title: Hydra
    Genre: Techno-thriller
    Audience: Adult

  15. Brett Jonas says:

    Email: Brettgjonas@gmail.com
    Title: The Grimsai
    Genre: Fantasy
    Audience: Young Adult

    Thank you for the opportunity!

  16. Thanks. 🙂

    “Secret of the Golden Heart”
    MG
    Fantasy/Adventure

  17. 1-alvaradofrazier at gmail dot com
    2-Winter Without Flowers
    3-Women’s Contemporary but also has YA characters
    4-Adult women

  18. Tambrey Granneman says:

    satan.sama@yahoo.com

    The Price of Betrayal

    Horror/Sci-Fi/Fantasy

    Adults

  19. Christine Read says:

    email: readchris@shaw.ca
    title: The Trouble With Queenie
    genre: children’s contemporary fiction
    audience: middle grade

  20. Sam Taylor says:

    1) sam (dot) wager160 (at) gmail (dot) com
    2) KEVARA
    3) Fantasy
    4) Young Adult

  21. Tambrey Granneman says:

    satan.sama@yahoo.com

    Title: No Place Like Home

    Genre: Horror

    Audience: Adults

  22. cbaldwin6@me.com
    Half-Truths, YOung Adult. African American and white teenage girls.

    I LOVE your blog!! Thanks for this opportunity.

  23. Sunni says:

    Thank you for the opportunity.

    1. marykdesigns@comcast.net
    2. Memorable Hearts
    3. Contemporary Romance
    4. Adult

  24. Tambrey Granneman says:

    email: satan.sama@yahoo.com

    Title: No Place Like Home

    Genre: Horror

    Indended Audience: Adults

  25. Heidi says:

    email: haulrich5@gmail.com
    Title: Something Old
    Genre: Contemporary Romance
    Adult Women

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