What does your character want? This is an important question to answer because it determines what your protagonist hopes to achieve by the story’s end. If the goal, or outer motivation, is written well, readers will quickly identify what the overall story goal’s going to be; this will better enable them to root for the character because they’ll know exactly what he’s trying to achieve. But how do you know which outer motivation to choose?
If you read enough books, you’ll see the same goals being used for different characters in new scenarios. Through this thesaurus, we’d like to explore these common outer motivations so you can see your options and what those goals might look like on a deeper level.
Character’s Goal (Outer Motivation): Having a Child
Human Need Driving the Goal (Inner Motivation): Love and Belonging
Methods for Achieving This Goal:
- Conceiving a child with a partner
- Becoming artificially inseminated (if one is single)
- Undergoing fertility treatments
How the Character May Prepare for This Goal:
- Reading up on pregnancy and parenting
- Giving up things that could harm an unborn child or decrease one’s chance of conceiving (cigarettes, alcohol, certain medications, caffeine, heavy weight lifting, boating, etc.)
- Getting into good physical shape
Possible Sacrifices or Costs Associated With This Goal:
- Going into debt
- Putting off vacations and high-end purchases in order to afford fertility treatments or adoption fees
- Changing one’s standard of living so one can afford the associated financial costs
- Replacing sex as a pleasurable experience with sex that is purely clinical and a means to an end
- Going to jail (if one is trying to obtain a child through illegal means)
Roadblocks Which Could Prevent This Goal from Being Achieved:
- Health conditions that could make a pregnancy or birth difficult
- A spouse or partner who doesn’t want children
- An inept fertility doctor
Talents & Skills That Will Help the Character Achieve This Goal:
Possible Fallout For the Protagonist if This Goal Is Not Met:
- Heightened feelings of loneliness and unfulfillment
- Growing apart from other couples one’s age who have families
- Tension with one’s partner that could lead to a breakup
Clichés to Avoid:
- External stressors tearing apart a couple during the adoption process, forcing one of them to move forward and adopt on his/her own
Click here for a list of our current entries for this thesaurus, along with a master post containing information on the individual fields.
What does your character want more than anything else and what is he willing to do to achieve it?
On the surface, the protagonist’s goal seems to be the most important, but the inner motivation driving your character toward this goal, despite pain, suffering, fear, setbacks, and sacrifice is what really draws readers in.
Understanding the four cornerstones of character arc (Inner Motivation, Outer Motivation, Inner Conflict & Outer Conflict) and how they frame a story is paramount for today’s writers. To help with this, we have integrated our popular Character Motivation Thesaurus into our online library at One Stop For Writers.
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