Critiques 4 U

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Critiques 4 U!


Happy weekend, everyone! We missed our monthly critique contest last month due to December craziness, so now that we’re fully into January, I’m excited to get back into the critiquing groove.

If you’re working on a first page and would like some objective feedback, please leave a comment that includes: 

1) your email address. Some of you have expressed concern about making your email address public; if you’re sure that the email address associated with your WordPress account is correct, you don’t have to include it here. But if you do win and I’m unable to contact you through that email address, I’ll have to choose an alternate winner.

2) your story’s genre (no erotica, please)


Three commenters’ names will be randomly drawn and posted tomorrow. If you win, you can email me your first page and I’ll offer my feedback. Best of luck!


Becca Puglisi is an international speaker, writing coach, and bestselling author of The Emotion Thesaurus and its sequels. Her books are available in five languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. She is passionate about learning and sharing her knowledge with others through her Writers Helping Writers blog and via One Stop For Writers—a powerhouse online library created to help writers elevate their storytelling. You can find Becca online at both of these spots, as well as on Facebook and Twitter.
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48 Responses to Critiques 4 U

  1. Cheryl Potts says:

    my genre is historical fiction

    I am writing an historical novel about the life of Martha Washington (and her husband, George.)

  2. Hi all! Thanks for entering. The winners this month are:

    Jennie Camacho

    Thanks again! See you in February :).

  3. David Pelletier says:
    Genre: murder mystery


    Southern Historical Fiction

    Thanks for holding this contest!

  5. Emily says:

    emcush (at) hotmail (dot) com
    Middle Grade Mystery


  6. Rita Jordan says:

    Paranormal Romance

  7. My email is

    My genre is mystery with a bit of sci-fi. Two best friends become the main suspects in the disappearances, then murders of two of their classmates. The are young females both age 18 and they’ve each signed up to join the Universal Federated Army of Space. They are looking forward to becoming Infantry as this is considered an elite specialty. But the deaths of the two young men have them stranded and their lives on hold.

  8. Deb Atwood says:

    debatwood@hotmail dot com

    Genre: YA Contemporary

    Thanks for the opportunity!

  9. Linda Thomas says:


    grandmaletters at aol dot com

  10. Romantic Suspense
    This sheep lady says, Thank Ewe!

  11. Angelique says:

    Thanks for your offering 🙂
    1. Included… otherwise
    2. Mystery – Romance
    Lots of sunshine…

  12. Sherry says:

    Sorry had wrong email.

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