Emotion Thesaurus Entry: Hatred

 

When it comes to emotion, sometimes we need a brainstorming nudge. After all, each character will express their feelings differently depending on their personality, emotional range, and comfort zone. We hope this short, sample list of expressions will help you better imagine how your character might show this emotion!

If you need to go deeper, we have detailed lists of body language, visceral sensations, dialogue cues, and mental responses for 130 emotions in the 2019 expanded second edition of The Emotion Thesaurus: A Writer’s Guide to Character Expression.

HATRED

  • Forearm muscles appearing cut from stone
  • Thoughts of violence, playing out fantasies of violence or humiliation
  • Bitter, seething words meant to provoke
  • A black mood that no one can dispel
  • A pinched face, frigid features, mouth twisted into a snarl or sneer
  • Spitting in someone’s face, at their feet or in their direction
  • Rash decisions, impaired judgment
  • Single-minded focus on how to destroy another
  • Starting hateful gossip
  • An inability to enjoy positive things or happiness
  • Angry tears
  • Cursing, swearing
  • A scathing tone
  • A shaking, rage-filled voice
  • Promising or declaring to another that you will destroy them/make them pay…

Win your readers’ hearts by tailoring your character’s emotional responses so they’re compelling, credible, and realistic.

If you struggle with writing emotions, you aren’t alone. The Emotion Thesaurus: A Writer’s Guide to Character Expression has helped writers all over the globe, and it can help you. To find out more about this bestselling book, please visit our bookstore.

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The Emotion Thesaurus is also at our sister site, One Stop for Writers. Visit the Emotion Thesaurus Page to view our complete list of entries.

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About ANGELA ACKERMAN

Angela is a writing coach, international speaker, and bestselling author who loves to travel, teach, empower writers, and pay-it-forward. She also is a founder of One Stop For Writers, an online library packed with powerful tools to help writers elevate their storytelling.
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[…] Conveying Hatred […]

Becca
12 years ago

That’s why we started this Thesaurus; we both found ourselves using the same old phrases to describe our character’s emotions. Making a list helped us so much we thought it might help others, too.

Marilyn
12 years ago

I find this list interesting and informative. I didn’t know there were so many ways to define hatred. Many people would probably write – he was seething with hatred – but just saying that doesn’t properly define the characters experience and motivation now does it?

Angela
12 years ago

Thanks so much for visiting, everyone!

Tina
12 years ago

I swear, once you have all these done, the first thing I thought of was “my that would be a great book”. I wish your blog well and tons of traffic because its one of the most interesting ones I have read lately.
Thanks for the invitation, and the comfy chair.

WendyCinNYC
12 years ago

I’m going to bookmark this blog too. Nice job.

colbymarshall
12 years ago

vendetta…yes, I have one of those. I love the hatred thesaurus (is that strange?)! Thanks for the post.

auria cortes
12 years ago

I book marked this blog. Excellent work.

Marian
12 years ago

The new idea for a blog sounds interesting, angela. Description can be tricky. I’m looking forward to reading that one as well.

Kelly - PTT
12 years ago

This is AWESOME! What a great focus for your blog! And you’re very good at finding excellent ways to write the same emotion. Thanks so much!

Becca
12 years ago

We’re glad to have you, Grace :).

~grace~
12 years ago

oh my goodness, these “emotion thesaurus” things are fantastic. I’m glad I found you guys. 🙂

Angela
12 years ago

Thanks for stopping by! Yes, we blog a few posts each week, rather than daily. Our Thesaurus is always posted on Thursdays, however.

When this one is complete, we’ll start a new one that highlights a different area of description that writers may struggle with. Thanks for taking the time to comment. 🙂

Razib Ahmed
12 years ago

Wow, so many things are related to “Hatred”. Thanks for it. I spent 5 minutes reading it. You have an interesting blog but the entries are a bit sporadic.