Setting Thesaurus Entry: School Office

Sight

chairs, couches, carpeted floor, little end tables, parenting/educational magazines, desks for receptionists with all the secretarial paraphernalia (phone, computer, desk calendar, files, stapler, pens, post-it notes, markers), smudged plate-glass window looking into the…

Sounds

phones ringing, papers rustling, click of keyboards, door opening and closing, noise of busy hallways outside, kids outside talking/laughing, running feet in the halls, period bells ringing, fire alarm, secretaries talking on phone/chatting/laughing quietly, flip of…

Smells

warm smell of new copies, sweaty kids, perfume/cologne, markers, coffee, leftover breakfast/snack/lunch smells (oatmeal, bananas, bacon, pizza, hot dogs, etc), hot printer cartridges, musty carpet

Tastes

rubbery erasers, wood pencils, bubblegum, hard candy, mints, fingernails, tears, breakfast foods from the community tray (doughnuts, bagels, muffins, pastry), coffee, water, tea

Touch

glass window pane, embroidered chair, leather couch, hard folding chair, scuff of carpet beneath the feet, anxious body movements (increased pulse, butterflies in stomach, racing heart, fidgety body parts), cold telephone receiver, metal door knobs…

Helpful hints:

–The words you choose can convey atmosphere and mood.

Example 1: I glanced up to check on Billy, who kicked at the leg of his chair as he waited for his turn to see the principal. The ice pack I’d given him for his bruised knee had fallen onto the floor and his glare burned the carpet. The third fight he’d started this week, yet from the way his lip puffed out and his arms squeezed his chest, you’d think he’d been on the victim end of things…

–Similes and metaphors create strong imagery when used sparingly.

Example 1: (Simile) I squirmed on the bench as the Principal’s door snicked open. His shoes made quick scuffs against the thin carpet and then suddenly he was there, looming over me like an angry wave about to swallow me whole…