Beaks (owl, eagle, falcon)
Thorns (raspberry bush, rose bush, blackberries bush, brambles)
Barbed wire fences (ranches, farms, prisons, mine fields, government areas)
Wrought iron fences
Synonyms: spur, nub, quill, needled, bristle, thorny, horned, spike…
Describing a shape is best done in as few words as possible. Think of the shape as a camera snap shot–you want to capture the gist of what you mean as soon as possible so you can get on with other related (and more important) detail, and the action happening in the scene
Accurate shape comparisons will streamline your prose, allowing you to describe an object quickly so the reader’s focus stays on the action and events of each scene.
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Actually, it seems like we missed an Anxious post. We’ll discuss and may follow up with that at some point. Thanks for the suggestion :).
The first example made me think of someone who must really like knives and it made me uncomfortable!
The second one was more like a story which makes sense, unless, of course, you really like knives.
Great tool for building as always.
A Mom's Choice says
Thanks for sharing your sensory stimulation for all to enjoy. When I worked with Alzheimer patients I had to come up with different sense activties to stimulate them. Now, I’m working on a book and I’m finding it so difficult to share the 5 senses. Do you have a sensory post for anxiety? Funny thing is I had started my own listings for things like clothing etc and began an emotion part as well. It’s mind boggling.
The second one is WAY more precise. Whoa.
It’s so cool how you do this. Must be great for the creative juices. 🙂