Sturdy table and chairs, tray of goodies brought in by a parent or staff member, fake or real plant, coffee machine kitchenette area (stove, microwave fridge, dishwasher, sink, counter), cutlery, coffee fixings (cream, sugar, tea bags, etc), dish rag, tea towel, coffee mugs, water bottles, binders, tests laid out to mark, garbage can, teachers eating lunch, carpet…
Laughter, microwave beeping, popcorn popping, fridge opening and closing, rattle of cutlery in drawer, water being turned on and off, the perk of the coffee pot, chairs scraping the floor, low whispers, food lids being popped off, the crackle and crinkle of food wrappers and paper bags, sipping coffee/tea, the clink from a spoon stirring sugar or cream…
Coffee, food warmed for lunch, fast food brought in (hamburgers, pizza, subs, etc), popcorn, tea, baking, spices, hot dogs, cologne/perfume (if it isn’t a scent-free environment), food gone bad in the fridge, burnt food
An array of lunch food (soup, salads, sandwiches, pizza, hamburgers, chili, subs,) snacks (chips, cookies, brownies, popcorn, etc), hot drinks (coffee, tea, hot chocolate) cold drinks (water, pop, juice, milk), mints, gum, etc
Pulling on the handle of the fridge, lifting and pouring coffee from the carafe, the burn of spilling hot coffee on hand, sweeping a hand along the counter to collect crumbs, peeling back suran wrap of prying a lid off a container, stirring coffee mate into coffee, balling up wrappers and tossing them into the trash, pulling back a chair, scooting the chair in…
–The words you choose can convey atmosphere and mood.
Example 1: Kathy Specks, the school librarian, had one of those high nasal voices that just set your teeth on edge. Worse, not only was she a talker, she was a hand waver too. Wherever she sat on the long, cafeteria style tables, people made sure to sit a seat or two down. If you didn’t you got the Bull-in-a-china-shop treatment, those hands of hers smacking into your drink, soup or bowl of salad and depositing it in your lap…
–Similes and metaphors create strong imagery when used sparingly.
Example 1: (Simile)
I stood behind Leonard as he rooted through the fridge, no doubt looking for someone’s lunch to steal. His old man butt hung out past the door, wagging like a fat dog’s hind end as he reached for the back shelf where I’d stashed my lunch. Every Monday I brought leftover pizza, and every Monday it mysteriously disappeared…but not today, not if I had anything to say about it…
Think beyond what a character sees, and provide a sensory feast for readers
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Annie Douglass Lima says
I’ve never taught in a school that had a dishwasher in the teachers’ lounge, but the rest of it is pretty accurate. I’d say the tray of goodies on the table is a rare but welcome treat (at least at my school)! Oh, and be sure to mention the teachers sharing stories of the weird or funny things their students did or said that day.
Excellent entry. I’ve spent many hours in the teacher’s lounge (or faculty lounge).
At both schools I’ve taught at, there has been a water cooler as well (the one with big jugs of water upside down and you press a button for fresh water).
Also for sounds, exhausted sighs as the teacher sits down. And laughter too! 🙂
Tara McClendon says
From what I remember of the teacher’s lounge (I had access as a student), you got it right. Of course I’d have to add whiskey to tastes, as several of my teachers liked to add it to their coffee. Now a days I hear teachers have to use clear cups, but that could just be an urban legend. :]
Ha I was wondering if a few teachers would post and tell me if I got it right!
Mary Witzl says
What Tiffany said, but add Turkish coffee, half-eaten baklava on the table, and a few other exotic elements.
I’ll be back to this one!
Tiffany Neal says
You captured the teacher’s lounge perfectly! I know, it is my escape! 🙂
Karen Lange says
Good stuff! Thanks for posting this.
Stina Lindenblatt says
I love your metaphors. That’s the part I really have to work on. Great post as usual!
Bish Denham says
Another excellent entry!
Thanks for this Angela!
I always try to incorporate all of the senses into my stories (not all in the same sentence of course!) and I’ve had some pleasant and not so pleasant results. 😀