Balloons, streamers, party hats, confetti, brightly-wrapped presents, envelopes, gift bags, theme-based paper products and table cloths, banners, birthday cake, cookies and brownies, a bounce house, water/sprinkler toys (for an outdoor party), party games…
Doorbell ringing, kids laughing/yelling, parents talking, doors slamming, pounding feet, shrill noisemakers and whistles, blaring music, TV noise, shrieks from outside, kids arguing over toys/games, voices singing Happy Birthday To You, candles being blown out…
Cake and cookies baking, just-cleaned floors, scented candles or air freshener, other specific house smells (cigarette smoke, dog or cat, potpourri, etc.)…
Sweet icing, moist or dry birthday cake, other desserts, salty chips, candy from gift bags, ice cream, waxy drink cups, juice, water, soda…
Breeze from open door and windows, cold blast of the a/c or heat from heater, hard plastic dishware, a cake server sinking into an untouched cake, sticky icing, cool drinks, cake crumbs, soft melting ice cream, rubbery balloons, scattered paper feel of confetti, the too-tight elastic party hat band…
–The words you choose can convey atmosphere and mood.
Example 1: Lightning forked the sky, sending wet kids scrambling out of the pool and into the house. Thunder boomed and the girls screamed, throwing water every which way. The streamers sagged. Crumpled tissue paper turned to a sodden, toilet-papery mess. Water pooled in half-a-dozen places on my hard-wood floor. I racked my brain for a way to salvage Annie’s party while she stared into the lowering sky, her palms pressed to the window. A single drop of water trickled from each hand and ran down the glass like tears…
–Similes and metaphors create strong imagery when used sparingly.
Example 1: (Simile) The party had been perfect, like something from the Hallmark Channel…
Think beyond what a character sees, and provide a sensory feast for readers
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Not technically a place in your usual sense but if you ever run out of places (yeah right!) I’m hoping you’ll consider something along the lines of transportation… inside a car etc.
Something I’ve always had trouble with… only so many things can go whizzing by before you admit you need help =)
Susan J. Reinhardt says
Hi Angela & Becky –
Off topic: You have an award at my blog (3/18 Friday Round-Up post).
ooh! I love this! I love the sounds and touch list most especially. 🙂
Tamera Lynn Kraft says
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Sheila Deeth says
This is great! Thanks.
Dawn Simon says
Some of my favorites: the smell of just-cleaned floors, waxy drink cups, and the contraction of a juice box as you drink through the straw! Great ideas here!
Julie Musil says
Oh, these are awesome. After reading this post I feel like I just hosted a party and need to whip out my mop. Great stuff!
Shannon O'Donnell says
Hmmm . . . my MS opens with a birthday party. I’m off to check it out! 🙂
Matthew MacNish says
I love how the setting entries always end up having the most detail. You just can’t beat the amount of sensory information that comes with setting.
Lisa Gail Green says
Ha ha! I just did a post about metaphors and how not to overdo it. I like your examples.:D
Stina Lindenblatt says
That might be true, Becca, but a lot of what is here is still very real.
Christina Farley says
This is a fun one! I love the unique taste of birthday cake with ice cream. And that vanilla flavored frosting!
Talli Roland says
Very timely, because I’m about to write a birthday party scene! Thank you.
Becca Puglisi says
This was a fun one, though I was torn because it seems, like Stina said, that less people have ‘standard’ parties for their kids anymore. Still, this one is for all the cheap moms like me out there :).
Laura Pauling says
Now I want to go write a birthday scene. Parties are so much fun. Thanks for this!
Your thesaurus posts are a fabulous resource. I loved this birthday party list.
Medeia Sharif says
Fantastic post. I recently edited a b-day party scene. It was a brief scene, but I loved the gaiety (of course there might be dismal parties, too).
This definitely caught the atmosphere of a birthday part for me. Excellent!
Karen Lange says
This is great, thanks so much for all the work you do for us. 🙂
I will remember the “memorable splat”. Great image!
Ann Best says
Dear Angela: I’m responding to this that you wrote on my recent post about my brother’s passing: “My deepest condolences. I know how you feel to some degree–my grandmother recently died and her memorial is this weekend. We were incredibly close and she was my last living grandparent. I will miss her so much!” My condolences to YOU, and I hope you feel closure and peace at the memorial!! Sincerely, Ann
Stina Lindenblatt says
My daughter is having her birthday party tomorrow. One thing I’ve noticed is there’s a competition as to who can have their party at the coolest location, with the coolest activity. I don’t think it is consciously planned by the kids. Probably a parent thing.
We have pets from the local petstore visiting us. Some parties have been held are art studios. Others at centers with organizated sports and physical activities. So even these things can add different dynamics to the story and take it out of the ordinary birthday party setting.