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Weather Thesaurus Entry: Dusk

October 13, 2011 by ANGELA ACKERMAN

 WEATHER is an important element in any setting, providing sensory texture and contributing to the mood the writer wishes to create in a scene. With a deft touch, weather can enhance the character’s emotional response to a specific location, it can add conflict, and it can also (lightly) foreshadow coming events.

However, caution must accompany this entry: the weather should not be used as a window into a character’s soul. The weather can add invisible pressure for the character, it can layer the SCENE with symbolism, it can carefully hint at the internal landscape, but it must never OVERTLY TELL emotion. Such a heavy-handed approach results in weather cliches and melodrama (a storm raging above a bloody battle, a broken-hearted girl crying in the rain).

SENSORY DESCRIPTORS:

Sight: slowly fading light; increasing shadows; what’s left of the sunlight shining vibrantly red, orange, or yellow; everything darkening to purples, dark blues, and grays; remaining sunlight shining almost horizontally from the western horizon; swooping…

Smell: food grilling on bbq’s, bug spray

Taste: n/a

Touch: a cooling of the air

Sound: crickets and other night bugs begin chirping, frogs croak, outdoor ‘people’ sounds fade away (kids laughing, doors slamming, voices, music), distant…

EMOTIONAL TRIGGERS:

Mood: Dusk is the sign that the day is ending. It brings about a feeling of relief as the stresses of daily life begin the turn toward rest and relaxation. Many people feel calm and peaceful at this time of day. The weather at dusk, as at any time of day, helps to influence mood. A rainy, windy dusk may cause nervousness and…

Symbolism: endings, transition, decline of life…

Possible Cliches: use of dusk to signify a dying person’s descent towards death

Don’t be afraid to use the weather to add contrast. Unusual pairings, especially when drawing attention to the Character’s emotions, is a powerful trigger for tension. Consider how the bleak mood of a character is even more noticeable as morning sunlight dances across the crystals of fresh snow on the walk to work. Or how the feeling of betrayal is so much more poignant on a hot summer day. Likewise, success or joy can be hampered by a cutting wind or drizzling sleet, foreshadowing conflict to come.

Weather is a powerful tool, helping to foreshadow events and steer the emotional mood of any scene.

Need more detail regarding this weather element? Good news! This thesaurus has been integrated into our new online library at One Stop For Writers. There, not only has the information in each entry been enhanced and expanded, we’ve also added scenarios for adding conflict and tension. The entire thesaurus is also cross-referenced with our many other descriptive collections for easy searchability. Registration is free, so if you’re interested in seeing a sampling of the fully updated Weather and Earthly Phenomenon Thesaurus, head on over to One Stop.

ANGELA ACKERMAN
ANGELA ACKERMAN

Angela is a writing coach, international speaker, and bestselling author who loves to travel, teach, empower writers, and pay-it-forward. She also is a founder of One Stop For Writers, a portal to powerful, innovative tools to help writers elevate their storytelling.

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  1. Martha Ramirez says

    October 15, 2011 at 12:36 am

    OOH VERY nice. I rarely use dusk. This helps a lot. Thank you! BTW I gave you guys a shout out on my blog today;)

  2. Pat Hatt says

    October 14, 2011 at 11:26 pm

    Great ideas and yeah the weather can play a part, I’ve used it and it does work wonders for a scene at times, others times not so much.

  3. Christina Lee says

    October 14, 2011 at 7:43 pm

    So great–a very interesting time of day. Either relief or melancholy depending on the scene and mood–thanks for the ideas!

  4. Stina Lindenblatt says

    October 14, 2011 at 6:39 pm

    I love your explanation for mood. I’m definitely going to take this into consideration for my next project. I’m hoping to have more scenes outside. 🙂

  5. The Golden Eagle says

    October 14, 2011 at 6:30 pm

    I love the smells you listed as related to dusk. 🙂

  6. Becca Puglisi says

    October 14, 2011 at 4:09 pm

    Yay! So glad to have you, Barbara!

  7. Barbara Kloss says

    October 14, 2011 at 3:09 pm

    Okay, so I’m new and I LOVE LOVE LOVE your emotion thesaurus! Seriously. GENIUS! THANK YOU. *bows* *places crown on your head*

  8. Amy Goldman Koss says

    October 14, 2011 at 3:07 pm

    Nice!

  9. Becca Puglisi says

    October 14, 2011 at 2:30 pm

    Welcome, Clara. And thanks for letting us know where you heard about us. Now I can pop over there and say thank you.

  10. Ciara says

    October 14, 2011 at 2:27 pm

    Beautiful picture. I agree, weather can play with a readers emotion. I found your blog via the Pay it Forward blog fest and Juliana’s blog.

  11. Heather says

    October 14, 2011 at 12:46 pm

    I didn’t know descent toward death was a dusk clique, good to know! I love all the sounds and sights you listed, they kind of made me want to witness a sunset, something I haven’t done in too long… Maybe I’ll have my characters do it for me. 🙂

  12. catherinemjohnson.wordpress.com says

    October 14, 2011 at 11:09 am

    Beautiful picture, and great tips!

  13. Mary Witzl says

    October 14, 2011 at 6:27 am

    How Twilight-zonish: a friend and I were just talking about the word ‘dusk’ and how mysteriously sad it makes us feel. For me, it’s the thought that yet another day is gone — and the worry that I haven’t spent it well enough.

  14. Becca Puglisi says

    October 13, 2011 at 8:46 pm

    I love the additions everyone has for what dusk means where they live. For years, ‘dusk’ to me has meant dinner, kids’ baths and bedtimes, lol. I had to step outside a few times this week to get a good feel for it. But I do live in a rural(ish) community in south Florida. And dusk is going to be different in different locales around the world. Thanks for the tips!

  15. Melinda S. Collins says

    October 13, 2011 at 6:53 pm

    I am lovin’ the picture you’ve used to represent today’s entry.

    I’m with Lisa on this one — I’ve always refered to dusk as the time of day where the things that ‘go bump in the night’ are coming out and getting ready to play. 🙂

  16. Carrie Butler says

    October 13, 2011 at 6:01 pm

    Oo, I love dusk! (Unless I’m driving, of course.) Great post, Becca! 🙂

  17. Lisa Gail Green says

    October 13, 2011 at 4:33 pm

    Ha ha, yes, I tend to picture dusk as more of the dark end of the spectrum. I’ve even described it more that way in writing (so you scared me for a moment there). 😀

  18. Karen Lange says

    October 13, 2011 at 1:10 pm

    You’ve got me thinking in new directions, thanks! 🙂

  19. SP Sipal says

    October 13, 2011 at 12:13 pm

    Having just come back from the beach, both dawn and dusk are on my mind as they’re great times to walk on the beach. The wind picks up at dusk and as there are less people on the beach, you can hear the roar of the waves more. But dawn seems to have more bird calls.

  20. Southpaw says

    October 13, 2011 at 12:06 pm

    Dusk in the rural areas is different from dusk in a city too. No crickets or dogs barking.

  21. Angela Cothran says

    October 13, 2011 at 10:28 am

    Awesome as always 🙂

  22. Bish Denham says

    October 13, 2011 at 9:20 am

    In the Caribbean (particularly at the beach) dusk is the time the no-see-ums (sandflies) come out. They are near invisible and bite, bite, bite.

  23. Matthew MacNish says

    October 13, 2011 at 8:59 am

    Red sky at night – sailor’s delight. Red sky at morn – sailor’s be warned (or sailor’s take warning).

  24. Traci Kenworth says

    October 13, 2011 at 7:31 am

    One of my favorite times of the
    day. So beautiful. But the
    creepiness of the night that comes
    down after–shudder. Lol. What can
    I say–I am a horror writer, and
    all sorts of scary things come out
    at dusk.

  25. Elaine AM Smith says

    October 13, 2011 at 4:37 am

    This is great advice. Weather can be a great foil reflect and enhance the actions and emotions being played out in words. It is so easy to shade from subtle nuances to painting by numbers. 😉

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