Critiques 4 U! March Edition

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CONTEST CLOSED!

I hope that Spring is springing wherever you are. This winter has been a hard one for many, so I’ll refrain from complaining about how the air has been on in my house for two weeks now and our eight-month Summer has already begun. No one wants to hear that. Least of all me.

What you DO want to hear is that IT’S CRITIQUE TIME again! If you’re working on a first page and would like some objective feedback, leave a comment that includes: 

1) your email address

2) the working title of your WIP

3) its genre (no erotica, please)

4) the intended audience

ONLY ENTRIES THAT FOLLOW THESE INSTRUCTIONS WILL BE CONSIDERED.

3 commenters’ names will be drawn and posted tomorrow. If you win, you can email me your first page and I’ll offer my feedback. Best of luck!

About BECCA PUGLISI

Becca Puglisi is an international speaker, writing coach, and bestselling author of The Emotion Thesaurus and its sequels. Her books are available in five languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. She is passionate about learning and sharing her knowledge with others through her Writers Helping Writers blog and via One Stop For Writers—a powerhouse online library created to help writers elevate their storytelling. You can find Becca online at both of these spots, as well as on Facebook and Twitter.
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Isabelle
Isabelle
5 years ago
Reply to  BECCA PUGLISI

and thank you for doing this. It’s so amazing. Congrats to the winners.
🙂

Sunni
Sunni
5 years ago
Reply to  BECCA PUGLISI

Thank you, Becca. I’m so excited I won! I look forward to your thoughts about my page.

Kathryn Jankowski
5 years ago

So sorry you’ve had to deal with harsh weather. We’re sunny in California but desperately in need of rain.

Email: author@kathrynjankowskibooks.com
Title: Perun’s Wrath
Genre: fantasy
Audience: Young Adult

Thanks for the opportunity. Best of luck to all!

Melissa Sugar
5 years ago

email: sugarlaw13@live.com
Title: Bayou Justice
Genre: Crime Fiction/Thriller
Intended Audience: Adults

Thank you for this wonderful opportunity!

Yanicke Forfang
5 years ago

Email: shundayah(at)gmail.com
Title: A Nightmare’s Betrayal
Genre: Portal Fantasy
Audience: YA

Dylan Jones
Dylan Jones
5 years ago

Edit: Email: jones (dot) dylan19 (at) yahoo (dot) com

Title: Fighting the Three Kingdoms

Genre: Historical-Fiction

Audience: YA

Krista Quintana
5 years ago

Super awesome opportunity! Thank you!

1. krista.n.quintana@gmail.com
2. The Orphans of Jadox
3. Fantasy Romance
4. YA

Augustina Van Hoven
5 years ago

I’m delighted that it’s finally spring. It’s time to plant my garden.
augustina@augustinavanhoven.com
A Second Chance
Time Travel
Adult

Ellen Pridmore
Ellen Pridmore
5 years ago

email: elpridmore@comcast.net

Title: Range Rovers
Genre: Fiction – Picture Book
Audience: Ages 4-8

Thank you for the opportunity!

CR Carter
CR Carter
5 years ago

E-mail: crcarter@iserv.net
Title: Infinity’s Discovery
Genre: Fantasy
Audience: Adult

Thank you.

Elizabeth Foster
Elizabeth Foster
5 years ago

email: e.foster3@bigpond.com
Title: Esme’s Wish
Genre: Light fantasy
Audience: YA

Anita
5 years ago

Email: ae (dot) siraki (at) yahoo (dot) com
Title: The Wolf’s Grave
Genre: Urban Fantasy
Audience: Adults

Thanks for the opportunity!

Alana
5 years ago

1) alana.j.mag@gmail.com
2) (after)life lessons
3) Fantasy
4) Young adult

Thank you!

Vivian Towers
5 years ago

Email: vtowersauthor@gmail.com
Title: Shui Gui;A Water Ghost Novel
Genre: Paranormal, Thriller
Audience: Young Adult, New Adult

R. E. Hunter
R. E. Hunter
5 years ago

Email: r (dot) e (dot) hunter2012 (at) gmail (dot) com
Title: Hydra
Genre: Techno-thriller
Audience: Adult

Brett Jonas
Brett Jonas
5 years ago

Email: Brettgjonas@gmail.com
Title: The Grimsai
Genre: Fantasy
Audience: Young Adult

Thank you for the opportunity!

Debbie Erickson
5 years ago

Thanks. 🙂

“Secret of the Golden Heart”
MG
Fantasy/Adventure

Mona AlvaradoFrazier
5 years ago

1-alvaradofrazier at gmail dot com
2-Winter Without Flowers
3-Women’s Contemporary but also has YA characters
4-Adult women

Tambrey Granneman
Tambrey Granneman
5 years ago

satan.sama@yahoo.com

The Price of Betrayal

Horror/Sci-Fi/Fantasy

Adults

Christine Read
Christine Read
5 years ago

email: readchris@shaw.ca
title: The Trouble With Queenie
genre: children’s contemporary fiction
audience: middle grade

Sam Taylor
Sam Taylor
5 years ago

1) sam (dot) wager160 (at) gmail (dot) com
2) KEVARA
3) Fantasy
4) Young Adult

Tambrey Granneman
Tambrey Granneman
5 years ago

satan.sama@yahoo.com

Title: No Place Like Home

Genre: Horror

Audience: Adults

Carol Baldwin
5 years ago

cbaldwin6@me.com
Half-Truths, YOung Adult. African American and white teenage girls.

I LOVE your blog!! Thanks for this opportunity.

Sunni
Sunni
5 years ago

Thank you for the opportunity.

1. marykdesigns@comcast.net
2. Memorable Hearts
3. Contemporary Romance
4. Adult

Tambrey Granneman
Tambrey Granneman
5 years ago

email: satan.sama@yahoo.com

Title: No Place Like Home

Genre: Horror

Indended Audience: Adults

Heidi
5 years ago

email: haulrich5@gmail.com
Title: Something Old
Genre: Contemporary Romance
Adult Women

Penelope James
Penelope James
5 years ago

email address: spenelopej@aol.com
Working title: Coronada
Genre: Historical/Magical Realism
Target audience: Women 35+
Latino literature readers

Cheryl Matthynssens
Cheryl Matthynssens
5 years ago

!) balanceguide@gmail.com
2) Pseudo-Dragon
3) High Fantasy
4) Adult

Patchi
5 years ago

1) email address: mymiddleyears at gmail com
2) title: Shrouded Goddess
3) genre: fantasy
4) audience: young adult

Thanks for doing this again!

Linda Strawn
Linda Strawn
5 years ago

My email: lindastrawn@yahoo.com
Title: Liberty’s Tears
Genre: Christian Fiction
Audience: Adults, older teens

Lottie
Lottie
5 years ago

1 – lottie_067@hotmail.co.uk

2 – The Good In Evil

3 – Fantasy/Sci~fi

4 – 15+