Critiques 4 U

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Critiques 4 U!

CONTEST CLOSED!

Happy weekend, everyone! We missed our monthly critique contest last month due to December craziness, so now that we’re fully into January, I’m excited to get back into the critiquing groove.

If you’re working on a first page and would like some objective feedback, please leave a comment that includes: 

1) your email address. Some of you have expressed concern about making your email address public; if you’re sure that the email address associated with your WordPress account is correct, you don’t have to include it here. But if you do win and I’m unable to contact you through that email address, I’ll have to choose an alternate winner.

2) your story’s genre (no erotica, please)

ONLY ENTRIES THAT FOLLOW THESE INSTRUCTIONS WILL BE CONSIDERED

Three commenters’ names will be randomly drawn and posted tomorrow. If you win, you can email me your first page and I’ll offer my feedback. Best of luck!

About BECCA PUGLISI

Becca Puglisi is an international speaker, writing coach, and bestselling author of The Emotion Thesaurus and its sequels. Her books are available in five languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. She is passionate about learning and sharing her knowledge with others through her Writers Helping Writers blog and via One Stop For Writers—a powerhouse online library created to help writers elevate their storytelling. You can find Becca online at both of these spots, as well as on Facebook and Twitter.
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Cheryl Potts
3 years ago

cherylptts@gmail.com

my genre is historical fiction

I am writing an historical novel about the life of Martha Washington (and her husband, George.)

David Pelletier
David Pelletier
3 years ago

david1pelletier@hotmail.com
Genre: murder mystery

Rebecca Owens
3 years ago

Rebecca42owens@gmail.com

Inspirational Romance

Janet Morrison
3 years ago

janet@janetmorrisonbooks.com

Southern Historical Fiction

Thanks for holding this contest!

Christa Allan
3 years ago

CHRISTA.ALLAN@GMAIL.COM

WOMEN’S FICTION

Christa Allan
3 years ago

WOMEN’S FICTION

Emily
Emily
3 years ago

emcush (at) hotmail (dot) com
Middle Grade Mystery

Thanks!

Gloria Oliver
3 years ago

gioliver@swbell.net

Science Fiction

Thanks!

Rita Jordan
Rita Jordan
3 years ago

Paranormal Romance

Nina
Nina
3 years ago

MG/YA fantasy
nfalkestav@yahoo.com

Marilyn Bostick
3 years ago

My email is marilyntbostick1@gmail.com

My genre is mystery with a bit of sci-fi. Two best friends become the main suspects in the disappearances, then murders of two of their classmates. The are young females both age 18 and they’ve each signed up to join the Universal Federated Army of Space. They are looking forward to becoming Infantry as this is considered an elite specialty. But the deaths of the two young men have them stranded and their lives on hold.

Henry J. Kaye
Henry J. Kaye
3 years ago
Deb Atwood
3 years ago

debatwood@hotmail dot com

Genre: YA Contemporary

Thanks for the opportunity!

Linda Thomas
3 years ago

Memoir

grandmaletters at aol dot com

Marlene M Bell
3 years ago

Romantic Suspense
dorsetgalwrites@gmail.com
This sheep lady says, Thank Ewe!

Angelique
Angelique
3 years ago

Thanks for your offering 🙂
1. Included… otherwise angelik.heart@yahoo.com
2. Mystery – Romance
Lots of sunshine…

Sherry
Sherry
3 years ago

Sorry had wrong email.
skesling@cox.net
Memoir

Sherry
Sherry
3 years ago
Lynn Farnham
Lynn Farnham
3 years ago

lynnandpaul1@bellsouth.net

historical fiction/gothic

aiar
aiar
3 years ago

aiar shai at gmail d ot com

Fantasy

Tambra Nicole Kendall
3 years ago

Thank you for offering to do this!

tambrakendall@att.net
Paranormal Romance

Jay Hicks
Jay Hicks
3 years ago

Hi there Becca.

I’m writing rural historical fiction.
My email is: jayjhicks60 at gmail dot com.

Thank you.

Leta McCurry
3 years ago

Women’s fiction – women who find the strength and courage to grab life by
the horns and wrestle it to the ground while hiding their vulnerabilities from the world.

Thanks for the opportunity.

Talia
3 years ago

1) Email – included

2) Genre – Fantasy

Robin E. Mason
3 years ago

women’s fiction / historical fiction

robin.mason59@yahoo.com

Janet Smart
3 years ago

middle grade
wvsmarties@yahoo.com

Kristen Johnson
Kristen Johnson
3 years ago

Thanks!

Middle Grade
kristengjohnson at gmail dot com

Melissa Sugar
3 years ago

Melissa Sugar
Sugarlaw13@live.com
Thriller

Thank you

Ellen Mulholland
3 years ago

ellenmulholland@att.net

YA Dark Contemporary

Thank you for this opportunity!