CRITIQUES 4 U

CONTEST CLOSED

It’s Fall, y’all! Which has absolutely no bearing on this month’s critique contest. I’m just so excited that the temperatures are finally dropping and the leaves are turning :).

If you’re working on a first page (in any genre except erotica) and would like some objective feedback, please leave a comment. Any comment :). As long as the email address associated with your WordPress account/comment profile is up-to-date, I’ll be able to contact you if your first page is chosen. Just please know that if I’m unable to get in touch with you through that address, you’ll have to forfeit your win.

Two caveats:

▪    Please be sure your first page is ready to go so I can critique it before next month’s contest rolls around. If it needs some work and you won’t be able to get it to me right away, let me ask that you plan on entering the next contest, once any necessary tweaking has been taken care of.

▪    I’d like to be able to use portions of winning submissions as illustrations in an upcoming presentation I’m creating on first pages. By entering the Critiques 4 U contest, you’ll be granting permission for me to use small writing samples only (no author names or book titles).

Three commenters’ names will be randomly drawn and posted tomorrow. If you win, you can email me your first page and I’ll offer my feedback. Best of luck!

About BECCA PUGLISI

Becca Puglisi is an international speaker, writing coach, and bestselling author of The Emotion Thesaurus and its sequels. Her books are available in five languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. She is passionate about learning and sharing her knowledge with others through her Writers Helping Writers blog and via One Stop For Writers—a powerhouse online library created to help writers elevate their storytelling. You can find Becca online at both of these spots, as well as on Facebook and Twitter.
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Jonathan Kalman
Jonathan Kalman
1 year ago

I’d like to enter. Thank you!

Julie Glover
1 year ago

Got another page that needs critique! Would love for you to do it. 🙂

Mike Cilla
Mike Cilla
1 year ago

Ready to send first page of as of now untitled WIP.

Roy L. Daman
1 year ago

Thank you for this opportunity. 😁

K W Garner
K W Garner
1 year ago

Thanks for offering this opportunity! 🙂

Sarina Rose (author)

Count me in. I would love to win a first page critique.

KD McDougall
1 year ago

I would love to have a critique.
🙂

Blaine D. Arden
1 year ago

Fall always looks so pretty when the sun shines, though winter is my favourite season 🙂

I’d love to win a critique.

Jonathan Kalman
Jonathan Kalman
1 year ago

I would like to enter. Thank you!

Lee Koven
1 year ago

I would love a critique of my first page. I feel like it needs fixing, but I’m struggling to proceed with that.

Jarm
1 year ago

Thanks!!

Jessica Costello
1 year ago

I would love getting some fresh eyes on my first page!

the Aunt Savant
1 year ago

Yep! That time again for the leaves to turn to autumn colors, celebrate Halloween and then Turkey Day! Thanks so much, Becca. You can put me in for a chance to win!

the Aunt Savant
1 year ago

Yep! Time for the leaves to change to autumn colors and to celebrate Halloween and then Thanksgiving! Put me in please; I’ll take a chance, Becca.

Victoria Marie Lees
1 year ago

As always, your offer to critique a first page is so welcome to writers, Becca. I’d appreciate a first page critique. All best to you.

KAREN BLAKELY
KAREN BLAKELY
1 year ago

This would be great!

Lois Simenson
1 year ago

Hi Becca!
You critiqued my first page, I rewrote it and Kensington Publishing requested my full map! At the same writer’s conference where I met Angela. Thank you so much for your help.

ALICIA
1 year ago

HAPPY FALL Y’ALL

Diane Barnes
Diane Barnes
1 year ago

Happy fall! Thanks for all the info on the site!

Hyacinthe Miller
1 year ago

I’d like to have my first page critiqued! Thanks.

Talia
1 year ago

Oooo, yes, I’d love to win a critique!! I write in several genres, but the one I’d submit for critiquing is YA Fantasy. 😀

Heather Y.
Heather Y.
1 year ago

I would love the opportunity to participate in this critique. Thank you!

Sandra Hurst
1 year ago

I’d love to have you review my first page.

Sandra Hurst
1 year ago

I’d love to have you review my first page!

Yolanda Ridge
Yolanda Ridge
1 year ago

Yes, please!

Catherine Moore
Catherine Moore
1 year ago

Happy Fall! I’d love to win a critique of my first page 🙂

Jennifer Hallmark
1 year ago

I’d be interested in a critique. 🙂

Mary Luce
Mary Luce
1 year ago

I’m in!

Pat
Pat
1 year ago

Hi, I’d love this opportunity.