Advent Calendar Prize: The Spun Yarn’s Complete Manuscript Feedback Package

Today’s Giveaway

Imagine if three veteran beta readers gave you feedback on your complete manuscript, which was then analyzed and curated into a report for you by a seasoned editor.

I think we just discovered writing heaven, Friends!

At a value of $499, the Complete Manuscript Package is The Spun Yarn’s most detailed manuscript critique, curated by The Spun Yarn Editor based on full reads from three veteran readers.

We start by selecting readers according to your genre and any other demographic factors you’d like us to consider. If you’ve written a YA we’ll assign a mix of teen and adult YA lovers, or if you’ve written in a specific setting we’ll tap one of our readers from the area. Each reader reads your full MS (up to 100,000 words) and answers a series of questions, including real-time check-ins, overall quantitative feedback, questions you’ve posed, and scores in eight key categories like Plot and Character.

What makes the Complete Manuscript Report different from any other manuscript critique is the consensus our editor is able to gather from three full sets of feedback as she curates your report and provides actionable suggestions for revision. Trends become much clearer when three independent unbiased readers agree. To see a sample report and learn more about The Spun Yarn, check out our website and author testimonials.

OMG, this prize, people! Want a chance to win it? Just enter below, and good luck!

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109 Responses to Advent Calendar Prize: The Spun Yarn’s Complete Manuscript Feedback Package

  1. LisaB says:

    huge prize!

  2. Ariana says:

    Super exciting package! 🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼

  3. Aimee says:

    Looks great!

  4. Mary Holm says:

    This is an awesome prize and exactly what I need right now. Thank you for doing this.

  5. Lehua says:

    Thanks, guys!

  6. Kris Atkins says:

    What a great prize!

  7. Very exciting! And I could definitely benefit from the read/assessment. *fingers crossed!*

  8. Oh, my godfathers. This is a brilliant and hugely worthy prize. Someone is going to be squealing with delight very, very soon.

  9. Jenna says:

    This is a writer’s dream come true!

  10. Jeigh Meredith says:

    This sounds amazing! Thank you!

  11. Karen Hartline says:

    Talk about inspiration to finish and refine. Wow.

  12. Talia says:

    Oh my goodness, this is amazing! I’d love to win!

  13. Tabitha Das says:

    What an amazing prize!

  14. Larry Keeton says:

    This is a great package!

  15. barbara says:

    Awesome give away

  16. Angelle McDougall says:

    Thank you for the opportunity to win this awesome prize. Merry Christmas.

  17. Puja says:

    This is great! Fingers crossed.

  18. Lovely says:

    Would love this for my novel draft!

  19. R A says:

    This would be so lovelyy to win.

  20. Melinda Workman says:

    Wow! Would love to win!

  21. Sharon says:

    As someone who crochets as well as writes, I adore the irony and twist of this company’s name. And my manuscripts can always improve under the eye of a professional (or three)!

  22. lisa clark says:

    thanks for this chance!

  23. I would love to win this because I have two unpublished manuscripts I’ve been querying unsuccessfully so far to agents and could really use professional feedback on them. Thanks for the chance.

  24. Megan Van Dyke says:

    Would love this! Thank you for the opportunity!

  25. sue frye says:

    An amazing prize!

  26. Amy says:

    This would be amazing. Thank you for the chance!

  27. This sounds like a great opportunity.

  28. Noelle says:

    Sounds very helpful!

  29. wow, this would be amazing since I’ve a novel ready for Beta readers!

  30. Jackie Batston says:

    The winner would be truly fortunate.

  31. Nick says:

    hmm. sounds very interesting – a combination of experienced editor and actual reader feedback. Something I’ll consider for my next novel regardless of if I win.

  32. Peter Loraditch says:

    Sounds like a fantastic offer. Any author could benefit from this service.

  33. Paul Go says:

    Holy socks! I could really use this!

  34. Rochele Smit says:

    Wow! What an amazing opportunity! Thank you so much for offering this!

  35. Alli Martin says:

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  36. Melissa says:

    I love these give-aways

  37. myka says:

    Thanks for the opportunity – can’t wait

  38. febe says:

    great prize!

  39. Christine says:

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  40. Ava Quinn says:

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  41. Betty Vanderwielen says:

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  42. Betty Vanderwielen says:

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  43. Fingers, eyes and legs crossed!

  44. Trish L says:

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  45. Trish L says:

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  46. Cyra says:

    Looking forward to this!

  47. Rebecca says:

    What a generous giveaway! Thank you. I hadn’t heard of The Story Yarn before now, but their services sound amazing.

  48. Ali says:

    I would love this gift.

  49. Ali says:

    This prize seems too good to be true! Thanks for including it.

  50. Em Rowene says:

    I would absolutely love this one. What happens if your manuscript is slightly over 100k? Mine’s an epic fantasy, so it sort of has to be, by nature…

  51. Laura says:

    Good luck everyone, what a great prize!

  52. Tara stiles says:

    Good luck to everyone

  53. Tara says:

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  54. Heather O'Connor says:

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  55. Oh wow, this sounds awesome!

  56. Bonnie says:

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  57. Lori says:

    This is the dream. Valuable and invaluable at the same time to any writer but especially as a newbie. Fingers crossed!

  58. Elaine Milner says:

    This is a fantastic offer! What writer wouldn’t love to have it? I would gain greatly from such an edit. Thanks so much for offering this prize.

  59. Lara Herrera says:

    What an awesome prize and an amazing opportunity. Thank you so much for your generosity!

  60. KT Wagner says:

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  61. Julie Hiner says:

    Wow! Just wow! What writer would not want to win This? Feedback is a critical part of the process. I want to write better!!!

  62. This is an amazing prize! Though how long do you have to use it in?

  63. Angie McCullagh says:

    How generous! Please consider me entered and also a new fan. Glad I found you.

  64. Hannah says:

    Very cool! Thanks for hosting this giveaway!

  65. Amanda Letterman says:

    This would be amazing. It would help with the whole ‘self-doubt’ thing that makes me keep editing and re-editing the book over and over again.

  66. Cathy says:

    Sounds like a valuable service.

  67. KL says:

    Thank you for the chance to win a Full Manuscript Package. If I don’t win, I’ll be checking into your services.

  68. Shelley Munro says:

    This sounds fantastic!

  69. Leslie P says:

    Such a cool giveaway!

  70. Tom Crepeau says:

    Thank you!

  71. I need this! My fingers are crossed that I win. 🙂

  72. Katherine Holom says:

    This sounds great! I hadn’t heard of this company before this giveaway and am now on the mailing list.

  73. Desiree says:

    Sounds like a helpful prize! All feedback is good feedback.

  74. Diane says:

    Holy crap! This is the best prize yet! Thank you so much for the opportunity.

  75. DJ Blackford says:

    For those of us without a finished novel, is there an expiration date?

  76. Looks amazing. I’ll be looking into your service even if I don’t win 🙂

  77. Vidya says:

    Of all the prizes that have been posted so far, this is the one I’d most love to win. Not that I’m trying to influence you or anything, but please pick me!

  78. Tim Seabrook says:

    This is a stunning prize to win and also to find out that there’s a company that provides a service like this is gold!

  79. Abigail says:

    What a cool service! I’d love to win it but I’m also glad to just know it exists.

  80. Charlotte says:

    What fun! Thank you 🙂

  81. Oh my WORD I want this so BAD!

  82. I love that you all are doing this.

  83. Ashley Wong says:

    I would love to win this awesome prize!

  84. This would be so much help for my upcoming novel!

  85. Ashley Wong says:

    I would love to win this prize!

  86. Susan Policoff says:

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  87. Marianne Hansen Rencher says:

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  88. Marianne Hansen Rencher says:

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  89. Charli says:

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  90. Kathryn says:

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  91. Megan Ping says:

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  92. Megan says:

    I desperately need this, haha. It would be absolutely amazing to win.

  93. Jennifer Jensen says:

    OMG, this sounds AWESOME! (and I don’t OMG much). Crossing my fingers that I win!!

  94. Tamara Meyers says:

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  95. Jessica Swafford says:

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  96. This one sounds so cool!

  97. Gwendolyn Ensz says:

    Oh my goodness! I visited the Spun Yarn’s site yesterday and I was HOPING that it would be something like this, but afterwards I thought, nah… that’d be too expensive of a giveaway.
    And yet, here we are! Yay!

  98. TA Hernandez says:

    This would be so great! I’d love to win.

  99. Beverly King says:

    This would be a wonderful prize to win. My fingers are crossed.

  100. Julie Hiner says:

    Oh. My. Gosh. WHAT an INCREDIBLE prize!!! This rocks. Can’t believe how amazing this advent calendar is. Even makes it so I don’t need chocolate 🙂

  101. Thanks for doing this. You guys are the BEST!

  102. Julie Glover says:

    Wow, what a great giveaway! Thanks for the opportunity.

  103. Shayna Weber says:

    I would love to win this!

  104. This sounds like a great critique model and an awesome prize!

  105. Karla Diaz says:

    This is awesome. I would love to win this.

  106. Oh wow! That sounds awesome! Crossing my fingers!

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