Setting Description Entry: Haunted House (inside)

 Sight

Dust, cobwebs, sheets on furniture, broken tables, chairs, windows, lamps, peeling wallpaper, gaps in the floorboards, holes in the walls, flickering lights (if there’s electricity) chandelier with broken strings of crystals, broken glass on the floor, spiders, cockroaches, rust, mildew, ripped curtains, shadows, gloomy staircases, old portraits & paintings, cracked…

Sounds

footsteps on the stair, creaking doors, window shutters rattling on the outside, wind scattering/rustling paper through a broken window gap, words whispered in ear, screams, crying, wailing, laughter, glass smashing, the scrap of a chair moving, the scritch of tree branches scraping at the windows, rats squeaking, movement in the walls, a…

Smells

Phantom perfume or cologne, burning smells, pipe or cigarette smoke, mildew, rot, dank, rusty or metallic smells, wet wood and stone, rancid breath, yeasty beer smell, food, dust, dry rot, rat/mice feces, urine

Tastes

Sour & dry mouth from fear, dust floating in the air and coating the tongue, salty tears

Touch

A phantom hand on the shoulder, the puff of breath on the earlobe or the back of the neck, the sensation of being grabbed on the arm, pushed, pulled, pinched, poked, slapped, burned, a feeling of light-headedness and nausea, hair rising on arms or the back of the neck, the body’s reaction to a drop in temperature (chills, shivering, breath puffing out…

Helpful hints:

–The words you choose can convey atmosphere and mood.

Example 1: I cringed at each creak on the old warped stairs, but it didn’t sway my determination to make it to the bedroom on the second floor. Halfway up, a shadow flickered at the corner of my vision. I froze, and as I stood there, caught a woody scent lingering in the air. Tobacco smoke? A shiver curled through the hairs on the back of my neck then cascaded down my backbone. It was all I could do to not hurl myself back down the stairs toward the front door…

–Similes and metaphors create strong imagery when used sparingly.

Example 1: (Metaphor) The dining room chair suddenly jolted back and tilted toward me, a gracious invitation by an invisible host…

Think beyond what a character sees, and provide a sensory feast for readers

Logo-OneStop-For-Writers-25-smallSetting is much more than just a backdrop, which is why choosing the right one and describing it well is so important. To help with this, we have expanded and integrated this thesaurus into our online library at One Stop For Writers. Each entry has been enhanced to include possible sources of conflict, people commonly found in these locales, and setting-specific notes and tips, and the collection itself has been augmented to include a whopping 230 entries—all of which have been cross-referenced with our other thesauruses for easy searchability. So if you’re interested in seeing a free sample of this powerful Setting Thesaurus, head on over and register at One Stop.

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About BECCA PUGLISI

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17 Responses to Setting Description Entry: Haunted House (inside)

  1. Jhouslyn says:

    It Game Some Ideas What To Write

  2. Hamza Zaidi says:

    Its just awesome because I get a idea to write it in my suspense story??

  3. shahad says:

    thanks alot it really helped me in my suspense story writing and it did really gave me some ideas to write it thanks 😉

  4. Zabit Khwaja says:

    Thank you very much. This is helpful to do my English HW.
    Zabit Khwaja

  5. Jaycee Lee says:

    Thank you !! This has really helped me to do my homework and to inspire me for different t ideas.

  6. chloe says:

    this helped me do my English course thank u sooo much

  7. Anonymous says:

    this is awesome! 😀 helped me do my coursework for English!
    thanks a lot 😀

  8. cardo says:

    this story is awsome i want to read another one.

  9. Anonymous says:

    Thanks Aloot It Helped Me In My English Homework:) But I Think It Would Be Better If There Were More Examples Of Haunted Houses:D x

  10. Anonymous says:

    this has helped me a great deal with my story for my English class 🙂

    THANKS

  11. Mary Witzl says:

    I love the image of the child riding a phantom rocking horse — very effective.

  12. Angela says:

    This one was so fun to do. There are so many unusual settings to explore–stay tuned!

  13. heyjude says:

    You gals cover some of the greatest topics!!! Hope you can get these out in book form soon or eventually! Keep up the good work!

  14. Bish Denham says:

    I can hear the wind moaning around corners…whhoooooooooowhoooooo.

  15. Abby says:

    Gives me the shivers too. =)

  16. Danyelle says:

    Gives me shivers just reading it. 😉

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