Finding the Sweet Starting Spot for Your Story

 

img_2794I used to hate writing story openings. I could never find the right spot the first time around. Sometimes, I started too far into the current story, leaving readers scratching their heads and squinting as they tried to figure out what the heck was going on. Other times, I started too early—well before the current story began, and readers yawned as they slogged through backstory dumps or long passages where nothing important was happening.

I know I’m not alone in this; it’s a common problem I see when critiquing first pages. But I’ve found a few tricks for finding that sweet spot so it doesn’t come too early or too far into the story.

First, it’s typically best to begin the story in medias res. I can’t remember who first coined this term in regards to writing, but it’s a gem. When you’re starting a story, you want to begin in medias res—“in the middle.” What this means is that you want to start your story once it’s already underway.

As authors, we’re always worried that our readers aren’t going to understand what we’re trying to show. This is especially true in the beginning, where there’s so much backstory we think is critical to a reader’s understanding. So we back up to a point where that backstory can be revealed. While we think we’re being helpful, this is a real drag for readers, who are forced to slog their way through pages of backstory info dumps that drag the pace and cause their interest to flag. Sometimes we take readers so far into the past that the characters aren’t even the ones in the current story, or they’re significantly different due to age or circumstances. (Hello, prologue—a topic for another blog post, but if you’re looking for tips on how and why prologues can work, check this out.)

Readers pick up a book because they want to get lost in it right away. They want the characters on page one to be the ones they’re going to get invested in and become attached to. This is best achieved if they start reading in the middle of the character’s current story.

And…where would that be? To find that sweet spot, look at your story as a whole and consider the first two parts of it. Blake Snyder (Save the Cat) calls these story parts beats, so I’ll go with that terminology.

The first beat in your story is the set-up. This is where the reader is introduced to your character in his regular world. The purpose of the set-up is to show your character’s normal life, before it’s turned upside down. It’s Bilbo sitting on his doorstep blowing smoke rings, seemingly happy and content until Gandalf shows up. It’s Katniss going about her everyday (albeit sucky) life prior to the reaping. The point of the setup is to show the reader that while the character may seem to be content, something is missing. There’s something about him or his world that needs to be corrected if he’s going to be truly happy and satisfied.

Then something happens that threatens his world. This second beat is called the catalyst, and it requires the character to make a choice that will propel him out of his current world and into a new one. Here are some examples of catalysts from popular stories and movies:

  • Prim’s name is called in the reaping (The Hunger Games)
  • Luke Skywalker’s aunt and uncle are killed (Star Wars: A New Hope)
  • Elle Woods’ fiancé dumps her (Legally Blonde)
  • Bilbo is left behind when the dwarves leave for their adventure without him (The Hobbit)
  • Harry Potter receives his letter from Hogwarts (Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone)

According to Snyder, the catalyst should fall roughly 12% into your story. This statistic is a beautiful thing because you can take it as a loose guideline or you can swear by it, whichever fits your style. If you want to go crazy, look at your overall page count, get out your calculator, figure out where 12% is, and get your catalyst as close to that point as you can. If your windpipe is closing off just thinking about that, then eyeball it. Make an educated guess and go from there.

This structure will give you a good idea of where to start your story because if you know the catalyst should start at roughly the 12% point, you’ll know how much set up should come before. Have you got too much? You’ve started too early and need to cull some of that to start your story a little later. Is there not enough set up? You’ve started too late and readers won’t have that necessary view of the character in his regular world. Start a bit earlier.

So, to recap: 1) know your set-up and catalyst, and 2) include enough set up so the catalyst falls roughly 12% into the overall story. If you strive for this, you’ve got a great shot at starting in a place that’s not too early and not too late. You might not get it right the first time, but you’ll be pretty close and will likely avoid having to rewrite the opening multiple times.

screen-shot-2016-12-20-at-10-22-30-amI’ve found this method to work really well for me. If you struggle in this area, give it a shot and see if it helps.

I should also point out that One Stop For Writers has an excellent Story Maps tool that allows you to lay out ALL the major turning points in your story. So if you find structure overall to be tricky, it’s worth checking out.

 

 

 

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About BECCA PUGLISI

Becca Puglisi is an international speaker, writing coach, and bestselling author of The Emotion Thesaurus and its sequels. Her books are available in five languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. She is passionate about learning and sharing her knowledge with others through her Writers Helping Writers blog and via One Stop For Writers—a powerhouse online library created to help writers elevate their storytelling. You can find Becca online at both of these spots, as well as on Facebook and Twitter.
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17 Responses to Finding the Sweet Starting Spot for Your Story

  1. Jessica says:

    While i agree with this:
    “As authors, we’re always worried that our readers aren’t going to understand what we’re trying to show.”

    Why is it almost EVERY critic says that want to know everything right now? Why ARG! I’m not kidding, they want everything spelled out in chapter one. No. No. No! I made it “hooky” (while giving a little info) for a reason dang it. Critics drive me crazy lately. If you want to know so bad, read on, jez. XD

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  4. This post has such great information in it! I am currently querying my second novel, and I had an R&R request from an agent. While working on the revisions, the #1 thing I changed was the first chapter. At first, the entire first few pages were a lengthy info dump describing the world of my characters. From first draft to finished draft, I must have changed the intro half a dozen times before I finally got that “sweet spot” beginning. It is such a hard thing, and finding the balance is a struggle. Helpful tips like these are so great!

  5. :Donna says:

    I love guidelines like this and whenever I think about this, it’s an immediate stressor. Anything that can help is a good thing! Thank you, Becca 😀

  6. I found the information in this article very helpful. Thanks for sharing.

  7. Thank you so much for this!! I just finished judging a contest and a lot of the entries I read started way too soon with info dumps and boring day to day life. I kept wondering when the “real” story was going to start. I know you need a bit of a set up to avoid reader confusion but that’s all. So reading the entries really helped me to understand where I need to start my stories.

    Love this blog!

  8. Jim, excellent advice (as always). And Becca, thanks for hosting this important bit of help for writers. Merry Christmas to you both.

  9. Mary Kate says:

    Thank you for this! It couldn’t have come at a better time for me. I wrote about 2/3 of my YA fantasy before getting stuck and needing to reformat some stuff, and I’m currently at the inciting incident and wondering if it’s in the appropriate spot. Just did the math and it starts right around 12K words, which actually sounds right to me. I know 100K is a little long for YA but my first drafts tend to be loooong beasts that need editing down by the end. Also, I’ve never written fantasy before, only contemporary, so I’m bound to be a bit wordy the first go around. Thank you, I feel a lot better about where the story is right now and will proceed past this point. Any more advice about where any of the other major plot points should hit (the refusal of the call, the first turning point, etc.) would be super helpful as well 🙂

    • Hi, Mary Kate! I’m so glad this post was timely for you. Regarding the other turning points, there are so many tools you can use to plot these out. Save the Cat, which I mentioned in the post, has a great Beat Sheet for planning the major points in a screenplay or novel. I use it A LOT, and it’s really helped to shore up my structure. We’ve also got a super Story Maps tool at One Stop that allows you to do the same thing. It’s based on Michael Hauge’s 6-point plot structure, so the terminology is a little different from Save The Cat (as it is for all the different structure tools). You can find some information on it here. These are just a few of the practical tools available; I’m sure one of them will do the trick :).

  10. Carol Baldwin says:

    Since i’m close to The END of my first novel, I’m saving this post for my next one. Will need to be reminded of this all over again. thanks!

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