When it comes to emotion, sometimes we need a brainstorming nudge. After all, each character will express their feelings differently depending on their personality, emotional range, and comfort zone. We hope this short, sample list of expressions will help you better imagine how your character might show this emotion!
If you need to go deeper, we have detailed lists of body language, visceral sensations, dialogue cues, and mental responses for 130 emotions in the 2019 expanded second edition of The Emotion Thesaurus: A Writer’s Guide to Character Expression.
- A mirthless smile
- Giving comfort to another without much energy (rubbing their back, patting their shoulder)
- Limp hands and arms
- Staring off at nothing
- A hanging head
- A loose jaw
- Feeling directionless
- Becoming less verbal
- Propping the cheek up with a fist
- A dull or bleak look
- Slowed responses to stimuli (loud noises, activity, a person speaking)
- A desire to sleep or tune out
- Depressed hunger and thirst
- The head dipping to the chest
- Silent tears…
Win your readers’ hearts by tailoring your character’s emotional responses so they’re compelling, credible, and realistic.
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