Skin of an apple/eggplant/watermelon
Freshly shaved skin
Gold wedding band…
Synonyms: polished, flowing, sleek, flat, flush, lustrous, refined
Describing texture in a story creates intimacy between reader and character, and can even cause an emotional trigger for both. To anchor the reader in the scene, make sure comparisons and contrasts are clear and relatable, and within the scope of the narrator’s life knowledge and experience.
Textures are a powerful tool for pulling readers into the narrating character’s world, so don’t skimp.
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Coel, you know, I didn’t think of a baby’s bottom. I think it might be overused tho–it makes me think of TV commercials for some reason.
Stephanie, thank you so much. And yes the apple looks so shiny and crunchy. I had to pick it for the picture!
PJ, looks like you and Coel are thinking on the same wavelength, lol!
PJ Hoover says
What about a baby’s butt? Smooth as a baby’s butt, right?
Stephanie Thornton says
Man, that apple looks tasty!
This is the best thesaurus site ever- I love it!
no baby’s bottom? or is that too overused already 🙂
Shannon O'Donnell says
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Bish, I was thinking more of the leaves tha are actually on the pineapple. Technically the ‘stem’ but thery look more like leaves? Maybe I’ll switch it to stem and it’ll be less comfusing. And yes, silk–that’s a good one. Thanks!
Bish Denham says
Hummmmm. Pineapple leaves are serrated along the edges, not exactly smooth. But maybe I’m being picky. Most fabric might be considered smooth, like silk or velvet, the ultimate smooth.
Karen Lange says
I like these posts! Thanks for sharing it and giving me something to think about:) Blessings!