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Setting Thesaurus Entry: Woods at Night

March 5, 2011 by BECCA PUGLISI

There is a forest entry already, but I think that at night the woods can be an entirely different setting, full of mystery and sometimes fear. I figured it deserved its own entry! Notice how other senses are utilized more so than sight–an unusual occurrence.

Sight

Dark tree trunks, shadows, overhanging limbs across the path seen at the last second, clumps of bushes, barely visible black trails snaking through the undergrowth, moon shining through a lattice of leaves, patchy sky & stars seen in glimpses through tree breaks, tall shadowed pines stretching up like arrows into the sky, streaks of cloud against the…

Sounds

Wind slipping through leaves, cracking undergrowth with each step, creaking tree trunks, the flutter of wings unseen, snapping twigs, grass and weed sliding against pant legs, breathing sounds, coyote calls, fox yipping, wolves howling (if within location), snarls, padding feet along a trail, a grunt of pain at catching a root or tripping on dead fall, a rip of…

Smells

Rich earth, rotting leaves, pine needles, fresh air, a slight scent of flowers, earthy fungus, tree sap, wild animal musk (if close), possibly the spray of a skunk (if around), green growing things (spring & summer), moss

Tastes

Sweat on lips, dryness in throat, sometimes a cold metallic tang if lots of stone is present

Touch

Cobwebs in face, cold, dewy leaves sliding across skin, slipping on wet leaves and mushrooms, tripping on bumpy roots, stones, dead fall, thorns scratching skin, scrapes and cuts on hands from falling in the dark, pine needles embedded in skin during fall, twisting and jerking at every unfamiliar sound, holding hands out to ward off unseen obstacles like tree…

Helpful hints:

–Think about the conflict that might be present in your setting.

Your character’s emotions will be on high alert at night because their visibility is low, making it a great time to insert conflict. This Conflict Scenario Database is loaded with ideas to help you.

–The words you choose can convey atmosphere and mood.

Example 1: Devin dove behind a wide cedar trunk just off the trail. Heart slamming against his ribs, he gulped at the air, trying to slow his breathing enough to hear. Back in the shadows, branches thrashed and snapped as Valio growled sharp orders to his men. Sunset had finally drained out of the sky overhead, sheathing the woods in shadow. Devin pressed his face against the bark, the ridges biting into his skin, and tried to become one with the tree…

–Similes and metaphors create strong imagery when used sparingly.

Example 1: (Simile) Eileen worked her way along the narrow trail, leaves sliding across her bare forearms like wet tongues…

BECCA PUGLISI
BECCA PUGLISI

Becca Puglisi is an international speaker, writing coach, and bestselling author of The Emotion Thesaurus and its sequels. Her books are available in five languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. She is passionate about learning and sharing her knowledge with others through her Writers Helping Writers blog and via One Stop For Writers—a powerhouse online library created to help writers elevate their storytelling.

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  1. ANGLELA ACKERMAN WRITES says

    May 1, 2020 at 8:45 am

    This is my new account! Thanks for all your kind replies! 🙂

    Stay safe!

  2. kit smith says

    March 11, 2020 at 3:32 pm

    if anyone could help me with how to describe palaces and castles, please comment me back.

    • ANGELA ACKERMAN says

      March 11, 2020 at 4:24 pm

      HI Kit,
      You can find information on Castles and other fantasy settings at our site, One Stop for Writers: https://onestopforwriters.com/scene_settings

      Happy writing!
      ~angela

  3. notsaying says

    December 27, 2019 at 8:16 am

    this has just made me re think and re write my whole stroy
    thank you this really helps

    • ANGLELA ACKERMAN WRITES says

      May 1, 2020 at 8:43 am

      happy to help!

      P.S. I’m Angela, this is just a new account! 🙂

  4. Bonnie Wood says

    July 13, 2017 at 2:55 pm

    I would take that fear away from you Laura. Having spend my childhood surrounded by woods on the hills and shore of Cayuga Lake I have spent time in the woods alone at night. It is the imagination and the untrained ear that brings fear into the equation. Shadows unseen during the day become magical at night. All the nocturnal animals want nothing to do with you.

    • ANGLELA ACKERMAN WRITES says

      May 1, 2020 at 8:44 am

      Thank you so much for your kind reply. Happy to help you always!

      P.S. I’m Angela, this is just a new account! 🙂

  5. reel king slot says

    December 9, 2011 at 3:17 pm

    I do not think I would be walking around the woods at night.

  6. Jenny says

    December 6, 2011 at 2:06 pm

    Just came across this one and I have to say, it really helped me with a scene I was struggling with. Thank you so much!

  7. tracikenworth says

    March 9, 2011 at 9:15 am

    I think the dark tree trunks description sums it up for me. Creepy and suspenseful. This will help me loads in my continued search for publication and getting my story just right.

  8. Angela Ackerman says

    March 7, 2011 at 1:20 pm

    I totally agree, Ralfast. I was just talking about this the other day with my kids, that if they really wanted to see what it would be like at night they would have to go far, far out into the country, beyond all light pollution and population.

  9. ralfast says

    March 7, 2011 at 1:15 pm

    What makes forest so frightening for the modern viewer/reader is the near total darkness. We are so used to having sources of light 24/7 that our mind panics when we lack it.

  10. Medeia Sharif says

    March 6, 2011 at 2:41 pm

    Wonderful!

    I love the woods and only a few times have I experienced them at night. It can be a beautiful-creepy feeling.

  11. Angela Ackerman says

    March 6, 2011 at 1:41 pm

    Great–I’m so glad this one helps. So many great stories have night scenes that take place in a forest or wooded area. I think this is a setting that naturally creates tension.

    Hope everyone is having a good weekend!

    Angela

  12. Julie Musil says

    March 6, 2011 at 2:23 am

    Ooooh, just thinking about the woods at night gives me the willies. You nailed it!

  13. Kelly says

    March 5, 2011 at 8:23 pm

    Very timely. Might be needing this for my wip!Thanks!

  14. Iris Zevlac says

    March 5, 2011 at 7:31 pm

    Loved this post! I just recently started reading this blog, and it has helped me to totally rethink how I’m going to write! Thanks!

  15. storyqueen says

    March 5, 2011 at 11:25 am

    Just wrote a scene involving the woods at night. You are right, they definitely deserve their own entry!

    Shelley

  16. Jenny says

    March 5, 2011 at 11:08 am

    This totally makes me want to go write a fairy tale. =)

  17. Bish Denham says

    March 5, 2011 at 10:46 am

    The woods are lovely
    dark and deep
    but I have promises to keep
    and miles to go before I sleep….

  18. Laura Pauling says

    March 5, 2011 at 8:58 am

    Walking through the woods at night is definitely different than during the day! I don’t think you could pay me to walk through the woods at night!

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