Beginnings and Backstory


You will find writers who argue that there should be no backstory at all in your first chapters. Why not? Because, by definition, backstory is what has happened before your narrative opens, and you want to establish the action first, get the readers locked in on that.

This is, on the surface, sound advice. These days we do not have the leisure time, a la Dickens, to set the stage and do a ton of narrative summary up front. Or, a la Michener, begin with the protozoa of the pre-Cambrian earth and record their evolutionary development into the Texans of today.

I am a firm believer in beginning with action (which doesn’t mean, necessarily, car chases or gun fights). The best openings, IMO, show a character in motion. And further, manifesting a “disturbance” to their ordinary world.

I tell writing students, “Act first, explain later.” A big mistake in many manuscripts is that chapter one carries too much exposition. The writer thinks the reader has to know a bunch of character background to understand the action. Mistake. Readers will wait a long time for the explanations when there’s a character in motion, facing a disturbance.

However, I am a strong advocate of strategic backstory in the opening. I say strategic because you do have a strategy in your opening, one above all—bond your character with the reader.

Creating reader empathy is vital in engaging them throughout your fiction novel

Without that character bonding, readers are not going to care about the action, at least not as much as they should. Backstory, properly used, helps you get them into the character so there is an emotional connection. Fiction, above all, should create an emotional experience.

I also stress properly used. That means marbled within the action, not standing alone demanding to be read.

The guys who do this really well also happen to be two of the bestselling novelists of our time, King and Koontz. You think that’s just a coincidence?

So here’s the simple “rule.” Start with action. Let’s see a character in motion, doing something. Make sure there’s some trouble, even minor, on the page (disturbance) and then you can give us bite-sized bits, or several paragraphs (if you write them well!) of backstory.

An early Koontz (when he was using the pseudonym Leigh Nichols) is Twilight.It opens with a mother and her six-year-old son at a shopping mall (after an opening line that portends trouble, of course). On page one Koontz drops this in:

To Christine, Joey sometimes seemed to be a little old man in a six-year-old boy’s small body. Occasionally he said the most amazingly grown-up things, and he usually had the patience of an adult, and he was often wiser than his years.

But at other times, especially when he asked where his daddy was or why his daddy had gone away––or even when he didn’t ask but just stood there with the question shimmering in his eyes––he looked so innocent, fragile, so heartbreakingly vulnerable that she just had to grab him and hug him.

Koontz bonds us with this Lead through sympathy. We don’t know why the boy’s father isn’t there, but we don’t have to know right away, do we? In this way Koontz also creates a little mystery which makes us want to keep on reading. 

Now, a word of warning when writing in first person POV. It’s much easier for the narrator to give us a backstory dump. But the “rule” remains the same: act first, explain later. To see how it’s done, check out the opening chapter of Harlan Coben’s Gone for Good,which begins:

Three days before her death, my mother told me – these weren’t her last words, but they were pretty close – that my brother was still alive.

We then cut to the mother’s funeral, and the narrator, Will Klein, leaving the house to walk through his old neighborhood. He has a specific place he’s going, the place where a terrible murder happened years before. Along the way he describes the setting and drops in some backstory, especially about one night when his big brother explained the “facts of life” to him from a ninth grader’s perspective. It’s a warm, human bit that creates sympathy. But Coben weaves it in with the action, which is about the narrator getting to the murder spot. That happens on the very next page. Very little time is lost to backstory.

Some time ago I interviewed Laura Caldwell, author of the Izzy McNeil series. She told me the following:

“I wish I’d known how to weave in background information instead of dumping it in big chunks. It’s still something I struggle with, although I think I’ve improved a lot. It’s a skill that has to constantly be refined so the background information which gets delivered reads and feels organic right at that point in the story.”

Good point from Laura.

Here’s an example from my legal thriller, Try Dying. Chapter 1 is about a bizarre death. Chapter 2 opens with the narrator in action, facing opposition (disturbance). A hugely successful lawyer named Barton Walbert. It’s a deposition. About four paragraphs in:

I was a pup compared to Walbert. He was fifty-three and in his prime. At thirty-four, I was just hitting my stride. But the arrogance of youth is a good thing for trial lawyers. Like the young gun who comes to town looking for the aging outlaw, wanting to test the best, I was loaded and ready. 

I wanted to slip in the age and the attitude. Then I got back to the action.

Striking the right backstory balance in your first few pages, isn’t easy. Here are a few final tips for finding that happy medium:

1. Take a look at your opening chapters. Highlight all backstory.

2. Take out anything that does not contribute to some emotional connection with the character. Move other material to a later chapter.

3. If your beginning has no backstory and it’s lacking that important reader-character bonding element, write up some of your protagonist’s history in a separate document, free form. Look for anything that gives us empathy or sympathy for the character. Then take some of that and put it in, a little at a time, in the opening chapter.


Jim is the author of the #1 bestseller for writers, Plot & Structure, and numerous thrillers, including, Romeo’s Rules, Try Dying and Don’t Leave Me. His popular books on fiction craft can be found here. His thrillers have been called “heart-whamming” (Publishers Weekly) and can be browsed here. Find out more about Jim on our Resident Writing Coach page, and connect with him online.


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2 years ago

Really good article. In fact, a lot depends on prehistory. It can be said that this greatly influences whether a person will be interested and he will not lose the desire to read the novel to the end. So how exactly the beginning makes it clear to the person whether the article is interesting or not. and if at the very beginning a person understands that this novel is not interesting to him then no matter how good his continuation is, he will not read it further. I write scientific articles, publications, and I can also say that a lot of things depend on the beginning. The most important thing is to interest the reader.
Thank you for such a wonderful article. I am sure that it will be useful for everyone, and everyone will be able to take something new from them.


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Julie Hiner
2 years ago

Wow!! Really great article. I feel like I am walking away with concrete and practical advice!!!

Glynis Jolly
2 years ago

Often I feel backstory is necessary to pull the reader into the drama. With this state, however, I know I need to work at being more obscure with those passages. Thank you for the tips.

Ingmar Albizu
2 years ago

Amazing post, Jim.
We all struggle with beginnings. I like to begin with conflict and a tease about the larger narrative but it does not always work.
I love the idea of establishing empathy or sympathy for the main character early.
Perhaps that should be my goal.
Thanks again!

Lewis Jorstad
2 years ago

Great article Jim! So much of writing is about balance. By implying that your character has an interesting history you portray them as a real person with a real life to be explored. Of course, if all you talk about is backstory, readers start to wonder if the character has much of a present at all.

Thanks for debunking some of the myths surrounding backstory and encouraging people to take a more balanced approach!

Victoria Marie Lees
2 years ago

Thanks so much for clarifying backstory in beginnings, Jim. And I agree with you, Angela. Backstory needs to be woven in deftly in the beginning to explain the why of story. This is a truly difficult task for any writer. I’ve shared this post online. Enjoy your holidays!

2 years ago

I am so glad you tackled this, Jim. The no backstory rule bugs me because while I understand the spirit of it, the true unfurling of story is the internal why of the protagonist, and that is tied intimately to backstory. Backstory can be used in openings, lightly as you have done, to provide seeds that will help reveal the why of motivation.

The problem of course is that many misuse backstory, and that’s why blanket rules like this come about: to help writers steer clear of certain potholes until they understand how to wield certain elements like backstory better.

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2 years ago

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2 years ago
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Paula Cappa
2 years ago

Hi Jim: Loved this post! I struggle all the time with measuring out when and how much backstory. It’s especially difficult for short story writing (or flash fiction) when you have limited time and space.

2 years ago
Reply to  Paula Cappa

Yes! The “strategic” backstory part went off for me like a light bulb. Any backstory in the opening has to be purposeful, not just to inform the reader.