Colors, Textures and Shapes Entry: Bumpy

Natural:
Rash
Turtle shell
Blisters
Pebbly beach
Shrimp shells
Pumpkins…

Man-made:

Bubble wrap
Speed bumps
Dirt roads
Bath mat
Braids
Pottery…

Synonyms: bumpy, lumpy, knobby, uneven, rough, irregular, clumpy…

Describing texture in a story creates intimacy between reader and character, and can even cause an emotional trigger for both. To anchor the reader in the scene, make sure comparisons and contrasts are clear, relatable, and within the scope of the narrator’s life knowledge and experience.

Textures are a powerful tool for pulling readers into the narrating character’s world, so don’t skimp.

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C.R. Evers
11 years ago

Great list! My current WIP has something to do w/ frogs. I may have to bookmark this list.

thnx!

Windsong
11 years ago

Great entry. I love how you have both natural and man-made things. Keep up the good work!

Casey
11 years ago

I don’t know how you think of some of these!

I would never have thought of raspberries, but they do have a really awesome bumpy feel (I was eating some the other day.).

Thanks girls!

Mary Witzl
11 years ago

You’ve done ‘bumpy’ proud here, but what I really appreciate is your pointing out that ‘showing’ can sometimes hijack a story and result in TMI instead of painting a vivid picture that charms and illuminates. I’ve been going over my own ms and finding far too many examples of that.

(Don’t forget avocados, by the way — knobbly, bumpy Haas as opposed to silky smooth Zutanos. And pilled sweaters and old fabric too.)

PJ Hoover
11 years ago

It’s all good, and I can never thank you gals enough!

Bish Denham
11 years ago

There are so many wonderful bumby, lumpy things and you chosen some really good ones. I’m going to add terry cloth and corduroy.