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Colors, Textures and Shapes Entry: Bumpy

April 16, 2009 by BECCA PUGLISI

Natural:
Rash
Turtle shell
Blisters
Pebbly beach
Shrimp shells
Pumpkins…

Man-made:

Bubble wrap
Speed bumps
Dirt roads
Bath mat
Braids
Pottery…

Synonyms: bumpy, lumpy, knobby, uneven, rough, irregular, clumpy…

Describing texture in a story creates intimacy between reader and character, and can even cause an emotional trigger for both. To anchor the reader in the scene, make sure comparisons and contrasts are clear, relatable, and within the scope of the narrator’s life knowledge and experience.

Textures are a powerful tool for pulling readers into the narrating character’s world, so don’t skimp.

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BECCA PUGLISI
BECCA PUGLISI

Becca Puglisi is an international speaker, writing coach, and bestselling author of The Emotion Thesaurus and its sequels. Her books are available in five languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. She is passionate about learning and sharing her knowledge with others through her Writers Helping Writers blog and via One Stop For Writers—a powerhouse online library created to help writers elevate their storytelling.

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  1. C.R. Evers says

    April 16, 2009 at 10:32 pm

    Great list! My current WIP has something to do w/ frogs. I may have to bookmark this list.

    thnx!

  2. Windsong says

    April 16, 2009 at 9:46 pm

    Great entry. I love how you have both natural and man-made things. Keep up the good work!

  3. Casey says

    April 16, 2009 at 3:01 pm

    I don’t know how you think of some of these!

    I would never have thought of raspberries, but they do have a really awesome bumpy feel (I was eating some the other day.).

    Thanks girls!

  4. Mary Witzl says

    April 16, 2009 at 2:00 pm

    You’ve done ‘bumpy’ proud here, but what I really appreciate is your pointing out that ‘showing’ can sometimes hijack a story and result in TMI instead of painting a vivid picture that charms and illuminates. I’ve been going over my own ms and finding far too many examples of that.

    (Don’t forget avocados, by the way — knobbly, bumpy Haas as opposed to silky smooth Zutanos. And pilled sweaters and old fabric too.)

  5. PJ Hoover says

    April 16, 2009 at 10:24 am

    It’s all good, and I can never thank you gals enough!

  6. Bish Denham says

    April 16, 2009 at 7:06 am

    There are so many wonderful bumby, lumpy things and you chosen some really good ones. I’m going to add terry cloth and corduroy.

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