Colors, Textures and Shapes Entry: Prickly

Natural:
Cactus
Porcupine
Hedgehog
Pine cone
Pine needle branches
Rose stems…

Man-made:

Hairbrush
Pincushion
Woolen blankets/clothing
BBQ brush
Cat or dog brush
Barbed wire…

Synonyms: spiny, thistly, nettlesome, barbed, bristly, briery, echinate, pricky…

Describing texture in a story creates intimacy between reader and character, and can even cause an emotional trigger for both. To anchor the reader in the scene, make sure comparisons and contrasts are clear and relatable, and within the scope of the narrator’s life knowledge and experience.

Textures are a powerful tool for pulling readers into the narrating character’s world, so don’t skimp.

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Vivian
11 years ago

Good use of texture. Very helpful. Thanks!

LadyFi
11 years ago

Love the two examples of the use of prickly!

Robyn
11 years ago

I was thinking about this today. You made me think. Thanks. 🙂

Cindy
11 years ago

Thanks for the example. I’m going to keep this in mind as I work on my next manuscript.

Yat-Yee
11 years ago

Welcome to my blog and I’m digging yours. What a fantastic way to charge our minds. Textures are great. I am constantly touching things (like my children) and in food, I care as much about texture as I do about taste and aroma.

PurpleClover
11 years ago

Awesome! Makes me think I need to go back through my ms thinking about contradictions and correct descriptions!

PJ Hoover
11 years ago

Thanks! Here in Texas we have lots of prickly things around!

Mary Witzl
11 years ago

It’s interesting: I could SMELL the hay while I was reading your second example; I felt all sweaty and sticky and prickly, too.