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Symbolism Thesaurus Entry: Deception

Published: February 3, 2011 by BECCA PUGLISI

Every day we interact with objects, places and sensations that affect the way we think and feel. This can be used to the writer’s advantage by planting symbols in the reader’s path to reinforce a specific message, feeling or idea.

Look at the setting and the character’s state of mind, and then think about what you want the reader to see. Is there a descriptive symbol or two that works naturally within the scene to help foreshadow an event or theme, or create insight into the character’s emotional plight?

In Nature:

Mirages
Snakes
Weather changes
Cloud cover
Sunlight (warms, creates growth but harmful UV)
Colorful yet Poisonous berries…

In Society:

Lies
Con men
Criminals
Hoarders
Double lives/Aliases
Spies…

These are just a few examples of things one might associate with DECEPTION. Some are more powerful than others. Telling a lie is a strong symbol, and likely will not require reinforcement. However, the presence of a white-coated hare may not foreshadow Deception on its own. Let the story’s tone decide if one strong symbol or several smaller ones work the best.

Symbolism is a universal language that can add great depth and meaning to your story.

So you can reap the full benefit of this powerful tool, we’ve expanded the entire collection by 70% and integrated it into our online library at One Stop For Writers. Each entry comes with a long list of ideas for symbols and motifs, and we’ve included popular symbolism examples from literature and movies, as well. These entries have also been cross-referenced for easy searchability across all our other thesauri. To see a free sample of the updated Symbolism and Motif Thesaurus along with our other collections, pop on over and register at One Stop.

BECCA PUGLISI
BECCA PUGLISI

Becca Puglisi is an international speaker, writing coach, and bestselling author of The Emotion Thesaurus and its sequels. Her books are available in five languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. She is passionate about learning and sharing her knowledge with others through her Writers Helping Writers blog and via One Stop For Writers—a powerhouse online library created to help writers elevate their storytelling.

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  1. Karen Lange says

    February 4, 2011 at 8:26 pm

    Great stuff! As always. Appreciate your efforts, Becca and Angela, so we don’t have to think quite as hard. I owe you both some chocolate.
    Happy weekend,
    Karen

  2. Becca Puglisi says

    February 4, 2011 at 5:20 pm

    Nice job, Angela.

    As a former EverQuest addict, er, player, I can see the deception in roleplaying–men disguised as female characters, kids trying to pass themselves off as adult, a rare few players relating more to their online personas than with their real selves.

    Welcome, Sia! It’s always nice to welcome a new visitor :).

  3. ~Sia McKye~ says

    February 4, 2011 at 1:15 pm

    I used symbolisms quite frequently to set or reinforce a scene, character action/reaction.

    I hadn’t read your blog before. Very interesting and informative. As the big guy says, “I’ll be back.”

  4. Stina Lindenblatt says

    February 4, 2011 at 12:49 pm

    Love it!!! This is definitely going to be helpful with my current wip. 😀

  5. Angela Ackerman says

    February 4, 2011 at 11:32 am

    Thanks shopgirl–I’ll add those to the list!

    Thanks everyone for the comments–glad this helps!

  6. Beth says

    February 4, 2011 at 6:18 am

    Great list. I always find the ones in nature intriguing, as they’re a subtle way to reinforce the action in the story.

  7. Shopgirl says

    February 4, 2011 at 2:06 am

    This is a great list, I especially enjoyed the nature’s list so I’m tempted to try a few myself. How about:

    Trap doors,
    Undercurrents,
    Fox?

  8. Julie Musil says

    February 4, 2011 at 12:10 am

    Great list. The berries reminds me of that scene in Hunger Games. Deceptively sweet!

  9. Beth says

    February 3, 2011 at 9:26 pm

    Thanks for the post.
    beth-project52.blogspot.com

  10. C.R. Evers says

    February 3, 2011 at 6:25 pm

    awesome list and awesome pictures. I saw the lion! :0)

  11. Shannon O'Donnell says

    February 3, 2011 at 5:25 pm

    Another great one for my Angela folder! 🙂

  12. Angela Ackerman says

    February 3, 2011 at 4:24 pm

    Oh good ones, Susanne! I’ll add those. 🙂

  13. The Golden Eagle says

    February 3, 2011 at 3:44 pm

    Another great post!

  14. Susanne Drazic says

    February 3, 2011 at 3:29 pm

    Great list!

    How about black ice?

    Or Two-way mirrors?

  15. Bish Denham says

    February 3, 2011 at 12:24 pm

    I kept trying to think of something to add, but I couldn’t! Nicely done.

  16. Lisa Gail Green says

    February 3, 2011 at 12:07 pm

    Ha! Another great one. Because isn’t there always some form of deception going on? Some interesting items on the list too…

  17. Charlie Pulsipher says

    February 3, 2011 at 11:43 am

    Great one this time! As I write my novel, I realize more and more how deceptive writing can be. I wanted a few clues in there early on that things are not exactly as they seem, nothing too overt to spoil the surprise. This serves as a nice refresher on deceit. Thank you as always.
    Funny Stuff I Write

  18. Angela Ackerman says

    February 3, 2011 at 10:51 am

    Matt, with role playing, the player pretends to be something they are not–a character that does not exist. So in this sense it is deception, but more of an internal one–we deceive ourselves, investing in a life that is not our own for the sake of entertainment. Some people can get quite involved in RPG (WOW, anyone?) and take it very seriously (too seriously, sometimes). In some ways, deceiving ourselves is the ultimate deception!

    Thanks everyone for the comments!

  19. E.J. Wesley says

    February 3, 2011 at 10:51 am

    Always love these, Angela!

  20. Laura Pauling says

    February 3, 2011 at 9:36 am

    I like this one. Great job, Angela!

  21. tracikenworth says

    February 3, 2011 at 9:33 am

    A powerful thing to work into you stories, and so worth it. More great ideas!!

  22. Jessie W. says

    February 3, 2011 at 8:56 am

    Ah perfect timing thank you so much

    Awsome post as always =)

  23. Matthew Rush says

    February 3, 2011 at 8:20 am

    That’s interesting that you said Role Playing Games. I suppose a bit of deception is involved in any storytelling.

  24. Alex J. Cavanaugh says

    February 3, 2011 at 8:16 am

    Not sure how much I even use symbolism when writing.

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