Definition: given to the heedful anticipation of the needs and wants of others
Characters in Literature: Beth (Little Women), Sam (Lord of the Rings), Melanie (Gone with the Wind)
Common Characteristics: kind, helping others, offering to help when others won’t, seeing a need when others don’t know it’s there, giving of their own resources to help others, worrying about people, anticipating the desires and needs of others, learning a new skill that will help them serve others (sewing, learning a language, etc.), volunteering for numerous ministry or service opportunities, giving monetarily to those in need
Clichés to Avoid: The unflawed thoughtful character, the shy thoughtful character who serves quietly in the background
Twists on the Traditional Thoughtful Character:
▪ Instead of a thoughtful character who is truly thinking of others, create one whose motives aren’t pure–one who serves others out of a desire to be recognized and thanked, or one with a tit-for-tat mentality who keeps track of his kind deeds
▪ These characters are usually portrayed as people to whom thoughtfulness comes naturally, when in reality, being unselfish requires work. Make your character real by showing her struggles to be selfless.
Build a worthy protagonist with a mix of unique strengths that will help him overcome obstacles and achieve meaningful goals.
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very nice blog .very helpful
SAM! Woot!
Oooh, Melanie from Gone With the Wind…I really disliked her! Even when I was young, I thought she was way too much of a pushover!
I agree, Jordan, that the names for the traits can often be ambiguous, meaning more than one thing or crossing into more than one area. That’s why we include the definition, to make the entry’s focus very clear–for the reader and for us, lol.
I love these… I use your advice often.
thx
Great Job Becca!
This is great. I’m loving this new thesaurus!
However, I wonder if there’s a better title for this character type. When I read “Thoughtful,” I thought of someone prone to introspection. (And was very confused to see Melanie below it.) Maybe “Selfless” or “Considerate”?
describes me exactly, both good and bad. great entry as usual.
Thank you for all the time you put in to provide us with these wonderful posts.
Another great entry!!