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Character Trait Entry: Shy

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Definition: disposed to avoid a person or thing; hesitant in committing oneself

Characters in Literature/Popular Culture: Lena (Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants), Edward Scissorhands, Celie (The Color Purple)

Common Portrayals: the new kid at school, the shy little brother or sister

Clichés to Avoid: the wallflower at the school dance; the shy girl/boy living in the shadow of a popular and successful sibling; the socially-awkward genius

Twists on the traditional shy character: 

  • Shy characters are so often quiet and retiring. For a twist, give your shy character a booming voice or a terrible temper
  • Villains are hardly ever shy. One who has to overcome his fears to achieve his dream of world-domination would be interesting
  • Instead of your character having to overcome his shyness, let it benefit him in achieving his goals
  • Make your shy character glamorous or drop-dead gorgeous instead of drab, bland, and fashionably clueless

Build a worthy protagonist with a mix of unique strengths that will help him overcome obstacles and achieve meaningful goals.

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  1. Fashion King says

    The idea of a really shy villain has always sounded fun to me. It’s kinda weird how uncommon that is, at least from what I’ve seen.

    • BECCA PUGLISI says

      Hi, Kate! We have a few entries that could work, depending on whether or not you’d consider that trait to be a flaw for your character or a positive attribute. Here are the definitions for those entries and where they can be found:

      Timid (Negative Trait Thesaurus): easily cowed; lacking bravery, courage, and self-assurance

      Withdrawn (Negative Trait Thesaurus): detached from others, having retreated inside oneself

      Introverted (Positive Trait Thesaurus): being inclined to explore one’s inner mental landscape more so than the outer world

      All these entries can also be found at One Stop For Writers. I hope this helps!

  3. Selene Hughes says

    I’m a little shy myself, so ‘shy’ is easy to write for my MC. But now she’s also absolutely gorgeous and charismatic – despite just wanting to be left alone. Thanks!

  5. Sarah says

    A lot of the super-shy kids I’ve worked with were really loud and controlling at home, so there’s really something to that! Great post!

  7. kara says

    Yes! This is a perfect post for me, my MC’s love interest is shy, and shy is very hard to write! Thanks. 🙂

  10. Susan Flett Swiderski says

    Interesting post. Thank you, dear lady. How about a shy politician or public figure? Wouldn’t THAT be a refreshing change? What’s that saying … better to remain silent and be thought the fool than to speak, and remove all doubt.