Definition: acting on desires, whims or inclination without forethought
Characters in Literature: Romeo (Romeo & Juliet); Anne Shirley (Anne of Green Gabels); Fred & George Weasley (Harry Potter)
Common Portrayals: Dare-devils & adrenaline junkies; people with ADD or ADHD; kids labeled with ‘behavior problems’; Artists, Actors & creative types; Hoarders; Shoplifters; Shop-a-holics; People prone to violence; Mobsters & criminals; Celebrities; Teenagers
Clichés to Avoid: The troublemaker student; impulsive sex leading to pregnancy; the ‘single impulsive choice resulting in terrible consequences‘ as a plot device (especially when impulsive behavior is not a character trait); pairing impulsiveness with stupidity; the ‘straight-laced girl who acts impulsive to fit in‘ plot device
Twists on the Traditional Impulsive:
- Impulsives whose actions end in a good result instead of a bad result, and this causes unforeseen conflict. Think about it–usually bad things have to happen to get our characters into trouble. Wouldn’t it be great to see the opposite? A challenge yes, but being able to offer something new to readers? Oh so worth it!
- Characters who are both impulsive and intelligent. Because Impulsiveness is often paired with doing something stupid, wouldn’t it be great to see a character’s inner conflict because of his or her’s opposing traits?
- An organized, thoughtful character who must embrace impulsiveness for the greater good. So, rather than a personal gain, the character’s impulsiveness is the key to something bigger. This would create a lot of inner turmoil, embracing a trait so unsuited to one’s personality.
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So many of my characters could be described as intelligent and impulsive. Their intelligence gives them so many interesting ways to make bad decisions. ‘
Would Sherlock Holmes be considered impulsive? He was extremely good at defending his every action with some personal logic he had.
Gonna play around with a variation on an impulsive character, thanks for the information. Good brain candy
I definitely warm up to impulsive characters the most. I think a lot of us love to see characters who are super free, even if it gets them in trouble, because as humans in society, we are expected to control ourselves constantly. There’s a fascinating article in NYT magazine — maybe last week? About how having a lot of choices, and decisions, to make, erodes our self control and will power.
Fred and George were such lovable impulsive characters. I’m so glad you used them as examples. This helped me to see that being impulsive is not always a negative trait.
Fred and George, yaaaay! Definitely Anne Shirley, too. Another great entry for character traits…will have to consider impulsiveness for my characters. I have to make sure they’re not all the same (rational, logical, think-before-you-act kind of people). 🙂
Loved this post. The main character in my book is extremely impulsive. You have given me plenty of great ideas. Thanks for this awesome post.
I love these posts! Who doesn’t adore Anne Shirley? You’ve given us some great ideas, as always.
LOL This is totally me. 😀
Another great post.
My editor is on my about my always smiling characters so I’m going to have to go through your blog and look for better ways to express a smile.
Thanks!
This was a good one. I think it’s been a while since I’ve made a character impulsive. It’s a great reminder!
~Debbie
Most excellent Angela. (Am I the only one who got thoroughly irritated by Anne?)
ohhh— i love this one!
A hard character to wrestle into doing what their supposed to in a story. They tend to get carried away with things. Sometimes, it leads to a better story though. Great character trait as always!!
Great post. I think I’m going to try and add a few impulsive characters to my current writing project. Will probably help to liven it up.
Adding a twist to traditional impulsive characters sounds intriguing. And quite challenging!
I love how impulsive characters can walk a fine line between inspiring and annoying. Sometimes managing both at once.
Not Fred and George though. They were never annoying. Loved ’em!
One of my MC’s is extremely impulsive, and boy was he fun to write!! 😀
I love writing impulsive characters–especially those who scramble to mentally justify their actions afterward. 😀 Great post!
I love the idea of forcing an organized character to be impulsive; that would be an interesting challenge!
I love impulsive characters. ^^ And I can think of a few in my own writing when I read this post…
My ambassador who can’t keep his mouth shut, my completely INSANE character whom I love to pieces… XD
This’ll be good to look at again when I’m trying to develop their personalities. ^^ So, thank you! Your posts are always great.
Anne is my all time fave character. Packing like a mad woman right now and wanted ti say thanks for this post. Going to delve into it on my write day next.week.!
This is a fun one! And I love the twists on the traditional. Fred and George are such a perfect example of impulsive done right, great choice of pictures!
Loved Anne of Green Gabels. Her heart was always in the right place, wasn’t it? And Calvin–that’s a great example! Thanks, both of you. 🙂
One of my favorite book characters when I was growing up was Katie John – who was impulsive in the extreme. I loved living vicariously through her exploits. Fred and George Weasley are now two of my son’s favorite book characters. He also loves Calvin from Calvin and Hobbes. All impulsive characters living life on the edge.
Great post! Anne Shirley is one of my favorite literary characters. She was impulsive resulting in plenty of hilarious disasters, but she never made the same mistake twice!