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Character Trait Entry: Prejudiced

Published: September 10, 2011 by BECCA PUGLISI

Definition: having a bias for or against

Characters in Literature: Elizabeth Bennet (Pride and Prejudice), The Malfoys, most of Maycomb County (To Kill a Mockingbird)

Common Portrayals: the old South, white supremacists, Nazi Germany, judges and juries, crooked cops. I tried to also list groups of people who are commonly prejudiced against, but the list went on and on and on. And for every group that is misjudged, there’s an opposing group doing the judging. So really, just about any people group can be the victim or purveyor of prejudice.

Clichés to Avoid: the backwoods hick, prejudice in the small town, prejudice described as ignorance or closed-mindedness (however true either may be)

Twists on the Traditional Prejudiced Character: 

▪ The prejudiced character who is well-learned and highly intelligent instead of ignorant

▪ Instead of applying prejudice against a race or nationality, have your character judge another based on a simple character trait (like Elizabeth Bennet in Pride or Prejudice). Your character might judge a shy person to be stuck-up, misjudge kindness for manipulation, or dismiss a popular person out of an assumption that they’re superficial.

▪ To my knowledge, the prejudiced person in literature is always portrayed as wrong. But what if the rest of society was wrong and the prejudiced person was right?

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BECCA PUGLISI
BECCA PUGLISI

Becca Puglisi is an international speaker, writing coach, and bestselling author of The Emotion Thesaurus and its sequels. Her books are available in five languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. She is passionate about learning and sharing her knowledge with others through her Writers Helping Writers blog and via One Stop For Writers—a powerhouse online library created to help writers elevate their storytelling.

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  1. Cedric J. Sims says

    September 13, 2011 at 6:56 pm

    the main character in my book is always judging people by their look. this is a great reference once again

  2. readable books says

    September 13, 2011 at 12:11 am

    i also like this article. very good post.

  3. Theresa Milstein says

    September 12, 2011 at 5:22 pm

    I like your examples that avoid stereotypes.

  4. thepatientdreamer says

    September 12, 2011 at 6:08 am

    This will certainly help me with my WIP thankyou very much.

  5. Ruth Cooke says

    September 11, 2011 at 4:26 pm

    Ooooh! Thanks for this, Angela. Reading this through just gave me about a half-dozen plot ideas. Great post!

  6. Carol Riggs says

    September 11, 2011 at 1:46 pm

    Thought-provoking post. It’s often difficult to do this w/o losing your reader connection to your character, though! I’ve had to tone my MC down, some…. I like your idea about what if the character was right and the society wrong?!!

  7. Kristen says

    September 11, 2011 at 12:00 pm

    Love how you picked Elizabeth Bennett for the photo for this one! You avoided a cliche so nicely ;).

  8. Traci Kenworth says

    September 11, 2011 at 5:30 am

    I applaud you, a very difficult character trait to pull off, especially with sympathy. Your ideas to make it (instead of an entire race) a tic that someone doesn’t like about certain people is brilliant. This will certainly help me in my own work.

  9. Leslie Rose says

    September 10, 2011 at 11:43 pm

    Loved your POV on breaking out of prejudice stereotypes. I thought THE HELP handled prejudice in a very intriguing way, adding the layers of the Jim Crow laws as a factor, and even showing prejudice within a race through Skeeter and her fiance’s conflicts.

  10. Becca Puglisi says

    September 10, 2011 at 8:44 pm

    Welcome Lufftocraft and Jack! This was a weird one, I admit, because it’s so intensely negative. But I have a prejudiced character in my WIP, so I wanted to explore it.

  11. Jack says

    September 10, 2011 at 6:00 pm

    Fabulous work, ladies! I have attempted to join from work, though the company’s computer has problems with the “followers” section sometimes, to the point that I can’t see the list. If it didn’t take, I’ll take care of it from home later on tonight. Pay me a visit if you have a spare moment at http://www.jackshideout.blogspot.com.

    Again, just super! Looking forward to spending many hours appreciating your hard work.

    – Jack

  12. Heather says

    September 10, 2011 at 12:34 pm

    Unfortunately, I live in the clique. :-/ Which is why I plan on moving soon! I’m immersed in this trait, it is all around me, suffocating at times, so when I say you nailed it, I truly mean it! Great entry! And um no, thankfully, I didn’t grow up here. I moved here for a job.

  13. Bish Denham says

    September 10, 2011 at 12:01 pm

    Good one Becca. Lots of people thought I was stuck-up when I was really very shy and introverted, so I know about that kind of prejudice.

  14. lufftocraft says

    September 10, 2011 at 11:30 am

    Just found you through AW. I love it! These Characteristic are fun it will take me months to read them all 🙂

  15. Lisa Gail Green says

    September 10, 2011 at 11:24 am

    There’s unmined gold in this one I think. So many potentially creative ways to make an important point. It’s unfortunately a subject that is in no danger of going away, it’s only the face that changes.

  16. Katrina S. Forest says

    September 10, 2011 at 9:28 am

    Really nice post! The only book I can think of in which the prejudiced people might’ve been “in the right” is Childhood’s End. And even that’s kind of up to interpretation.

  17. Gail Shepherd says

    September 10, 2011 at 9:19 am

    As usual, you are one step ahead of me, and how glad I am of that! My next novel deals with prejudice as a central theme, so I’m going to copy these notes verbatim into the cool little index cards on my new…ta dum…Scrivener program! I’ll also mention a terrific book you may not know but that deals with prejudice in 1960s Florida: *Down Sand Mountain*, by Steve Watkins. Thanks Becca.

  18. Angela Ackerman says

    September 10, 2011 at 9:14 am

    Great one Becca! 🙂

  19. genelempp says

    September 10, 2011 at 7:18 am

    Nicely done, Becca. Another great addition 🙂

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