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Character Trait Entry: Critical

Published: November 5, 2011 by ANGELA ACKERMAN

Definition:  inclined to criticize severely; to evaluate judiciously

Characters in Literature: Headmistress Trunchbull (Matilda); Professor Snape (Harry Potter); Norma Bates ‘Mother’ (Psycho)

Common Portrayals: Unyielding coaches, professors and teachers; nuns who run orphanages & schools; pressuring parents living their dreams through their children via sports/activities; Army boot camp trainers

Clichés to Avoid: The overbearing parent or grandparent; a sadistic principal or teacher who enjoys brow-beating students; the older sister who is over critical of her younger siblings; the boss for whom nothing is ever good enough   

Twists on the Traditional Critic: 

  • Critics are often portrayed as negative within a storyline, or even as villains. Try creating a critical character as a positive force, rather than a ‘necessary evil’ device for another character to succeed (like your typical coach/star athlete duo).
  • Most critics are seen as hardened individuals made that way by circumstances & the environment. Try to infuse soft-hardheartedness in your critic, or give us a critical character who is emotional &/ encouraging.
  • The critical character’s biggest target is often themselves. They can drive themselves with high expectations and then hold others to the same standards. What happens when a critical, driven character is placed in a situation where the goal is to ensure a defeat of some kind, not success?

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ANGELA ACKERMAN
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Angela is a writing coach, international speaker, and bestselling author who loves to travel, teach, empower writers, and pay-it-forward. She also is a founder of One Stop For Writers, a portal to powerful, innovative tools to help writers elevate their storytelling.

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  1. Marsha Sigman says

    November 7, 2011 at 1:41 pm

    Snape is such a rich brilliant character. Also The Trunchbull.lol

    Now I’m going to have to rethink one or two of my characters!

  2. Kim Van Sickler says

    November 7, 2011 at 4:30 am

    “What happens when a critical, driven character is placed in a situation where the goal is to ensure a defeat of some kind, not success?” You could end up with a brilliant character like Sue Sylvester on Glee.

  3. Stina Lindenblatt says

    November 6, 2011 at 8:25 pm

    My family and I watched the first Harry Potter movie (again) the weekend. Snape was the perfect choice for this post. 😀

  4. Leslie Rose says

    November 6, 2011 at 2:55 pm

    Snape is a wonderful example. He ended up being one of the most multi-dimensional characters in the series, but his critical nature made us slow to warm up to him at all. I also love Gandalf’s cranky critical side in LOTR.

  5. Traci Kenworth says

    November 6, 2011 at 8:12 am

    I have to agree that it’s may be hard
    to make a critical character
    sympathetic, but it would be a
    challenge to try. I like my challenges–

  6. Carrie Butler says

    November 5, 2011 at 9:37 pm

    So true about the cliches, and I loved the twists. Great post! 🙂

  7. Laura Pauling says

    November 5, 2011 at 8:02 pm

    I think it’s really hard to make a critical character likeable. Snape is a great example. I think it’s even harder when it’s the main character. They make great antagonists though!

  8. Elizabeth Varadan aka Mrs. Seraphina says

    November 5, 2011 at 3:30 pm

    I enjoy the way you analye so many aspects of a trait, giving it more dimension.

  9. Kelly Hashway says

    November 5, 2011 at 3:23 pm

    Eccentric is such a good trait to mix with critical, and it can also be a motivator for being critical. So many possibilities there.

  10. Cynthia Chapman Willis says

    November 5, 2011 at 2:43 pm

    The photo of Snape is perfect for this post! Critical people and characters can be very complicated, which is why I love your twists on the traditional critic-fantastic!

  11. Becca Puglisi says

    November 5, 2011 at 2:19 pm

    Love the positives here. It’s so often viewed as negative, but when tempered, being critical is a useful and powerful trait.

  12. Mirka Breen says

    November 5, 2011 at 1:50 pm

    I especially liked the mention of avoiding the ‘critical character clichés.’ How tempting they are, and how ultimately flat.

  13. Heather says

    November 5, 2011 at 1:10 pm

    “An eye for flaws,” I love that! Something to keep in mine while writing envious characters. As always, you picked the perfect character for envy!

  14. Loree Huebner says

    November 5, 2011 at 12:01 pm

    Love the “twist on traditional” tips you posted.

    Great info!

  15. Mark says

    November 5, 2011 at 10:16 am

    Aloha and hi from HI 🙂

    A Bluddy (blog buddy) of mine told me about y’all, and I just wanted to say “put me in, coach…” I don’t know that you need another muse, but y’all are writing some great stuff, so mahalo!

  16. Dianne K. Salerni says

    November 5, 2011 at 9:32 am

    I like this post! I’m in the stages of planning a new project, and you’ve given me something to think about here!

  17. Theresa Milstein says

    November 5, 2011 at 7:58 am

    I kept hearing, “Fifty points from Gryffindor,” as I read this post. Snape was extra critical with the Gryffindor, but favored Slytherin. Such a great antagonist.

    I’ll be sad when you run out of character types.

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