Definition: Having no pity; merciless; without compassion
Characters in Literature: Rumpelstiltskin (Brothers Grimm); Michael Corleone (The Godfather); Uncles Balder & Grim (Troll Fell)
Cliches to Avoid: The Hitler-esque military leader; the vampire killer bent on eradicating a species; the ruthless & beautiful female assassin; the guillotine-happy ruler or king; the stereotypical cardboard ‘power at all costs’ villain
Twists on the Traditional Ruthless:
- Ruthless individuals are almost always cunning and intelligent. If a character with this trait did not have smarts to fall back on, how would they compensate?
- Because ruthlessness and success go hand-in-hand, a archetype triangle is often created: rich, powerful & influential. Cast that cliche aside! Give us a ruthless grandmother, a cunning soccer mom or a shrewd bus driver.
- Ruthless is most frequently presented as a negative. Challenge yourself to create a character who uses this trait for the greater good.
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Kelly Hashway says
Funny would be a great contrast. I’m getting ideas already!
Traci Kenworth says
Ruthless grandmother? Reminds me
of those V.C. Andrews books.
Creepy. Great blog!!
Rachna Chhabria says
Love this post. I am in the process of creating an antagonist that kids will hate on sight and this post comes as a blessing.
Julie Musil says
I love your idea to create unlikely ruthless characters! Love this, thanks
Roza M says
I love the show “The Grimm”. Anyways, thanksgiving is right around the corner and I am currently going around and thanking each blogger that follows me. So thanks for following and I hope you have a fantastic weekend!
Cynthia Chapman Willis says
A ruthless grandmother or soccer mom–that’s great! This is perfect information for an antagonist. Very inspiring.
Diane Carlisle says
A ruthless child is always creepy to me. I’m thinking of the movie “Orphan”.
Jemi Fraser says
My villain won’t come into my story for a few chapters yet, but I’ll be coming back to this post for some tips! 🙂
Loree Huebner says
Loved this post.
I remember the Flowers In The Attic grandmother…she was creepy. Louise Fletcher played “Grandmother” in the movie, Flowers..she also played another ruthless character in Cuckoo’s Nest – “Nurse Ratched”.
Michael Offutt, Expert Critic says
If you are a manager, having no ruth at your side allows you to accomplish many capitalistic goals. Sometimes, I guess, it is necessary to kick Ruth to the curb.
Ah, a common “villain” trait, but as the cliche section warns, a difficult one to use if the character lacks any depth.
I would also caution against the “win for winning” sake attitude slapped onto these characters. Their motivations, no matter how petty they may seem, have to be believable.
Just my 2 cents. 😉
Carry on! 😀
Angela Ackerman says
Laura, FLOWERS IN THE ATTIC is a great example! Boy it’s been forever since I read that book–I would love to reread it! 🙂
Laura Pauling says
Ruthless grandmother? I think Flowers in the Attic. Creeeeeepy.
I think this type is hard to write as the villain b/c it’s hard to create empathy and a well rounded character. But obviously it can be done. Maybe these characters aren’t meant to have empathy though.
Love the picture!
Becca Puglisi says
Love the idea of a ruthless grandmother. And Al will be excited to see the Corleones represented. Great breakdown, Ange!