Definition: watchful or careful; alert to risk
Characters in Literature: Elrond (Lord of the Rings); Hermione Granger (Harry Potter); Stanley Yelnats (Holes)
Common Portrayals: Parents, politicians worried about voters; health and critical care specialists (surgeons, doctors, nurses and hospital staff); the police, firemen and other first responders; military leaders; publicists; people keeping secrets
Cliches to Avoid: The sheltering parent who practically bubble-wraps their kid before letting them out the door; the teacher or committee that over plans, sucking all the fun out of an event; a cautious character used as a plot device, warning the main character that their reckless ways will land them in deep trouble…and then it does
Twists on the Traditional Cautious Character:
Anyone bearing responsibility for others is naturally cautious. However, few truly dangerous situations allow time to plan. Put a Cautious character responsible for more than himself in a situation with a high stakes and a ramped up ‘ticking clock’, forcing them to act.
Do caution and instinct go hand-in-hand, or do they lay at opposite ends of the spectrum? Explore this relationship with a cautious character–will their instinct lead to caution, or does caution actually hamper their instincts, forcing them to stop and think about the pros and cons rather than act in a way that feels natural?
Build a worthy protagonist with a mix of unique strengths that will help him overcome obstacles and achieve meaningful goals.
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Becca Puglisi says
An impulsive/responsible combination sounds like a great character combo. Very unusual, but realistic if you write it consistently. This is how you create unique characters, so I say go for it!
Monica T. Rodriguez says
Like @patonlorraine, I’m now wondering if it’s realistic to have my character be impulsive, though he feels a great responsibility for his brother (who he partly raised). Sounds like they’re in contradiction. OTOH, you’ve also said the contradiction may be good!
L.B. Gale says
Rick in The Walking Dead comes to mind. I haven’t seen the finale yet, but I know that this season his caution has been a focus of the plot. Lots of drama comes from pitting the cautious hero against the reckless/gunslinger type of hero.
Bonnee Crawford says
Love these entries of yours! 🙂
Elisa Nuckle says
This came at a perfect time! I’m writing a WIP where the character is cautious but still independent. However, she has a lot of people depending on her, or she feels she does, and I didn’t want to create a cliche cautious person. So thanks for this! =D
Leslie Rose says
Love Elrond. Especially because when push comes to shove he does send the elves to fight the Uruk Hai. You go, Elf. You know when a cautious character acts, they mean business.
I enjoy your character traits posts!
Now I’m mulling over how to merge cautious and irresponsible traits into one character. Hmmm… 🙂
Bish Denham says
Elrond is a perfect choice! Cautious, but not to a fault. Cautious in wanting to expose all the possible consequences, to not rush in making a decision. Caution with wisdom.
Michael Horvath says
The joke around the African-American part of my family is that “the black guy always dies first” in a movie. After watching that happen over and over they are almost 100% accurate. Now maybe if they make him less cautious or even give him a line he might live a little longer. lol
Natalie Aguirre says
Seeing Elrond makes me want to watch those movies again. Thanks for the great post.
Traci Kenworth says
I love the character of Elrond. Cautious–but not afraid to fight for those he loved. My hero is this sort of person in the wip I’m editing at the moment. He needs to be since its a horror story, lol…
“Cautious characters … generally are the ones still alive at the end of a Horror movie.”
Hah! That’s a good one. This nails me perfectly, and my two daughters as well. Though I was neither overprotected as a child nor overprotecting as a parent.