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Physical Feature Entry: Feet

October 13, 2012 by ANGELA ACKERMAN

Physical description of a character can be difficult to convey—too much will slow the pace or feel ‘list-like’, while too little will not allow readers to form a clear mental image. If a reader cannot imagine what your character looks like, they may have trouble connecting with them on a personal level, or caring about their plight.

One way to balance the showing and telling of physical description is to showcase a few details that really help ‘tell the story’ about who your character is and what they’ve been through up to this point. Think about what makes them different and interesting. Can a unique feature, clothing choice or way they carry themselves help to hint at their personality? Also, consider how they move their body. Using movement will naturally show a character’s physical characteristics, keep the pace flowing and help to convey their emotions.

Descriptors: dry, cracked, bony, stinky, flat, arched, hairy, dainty, dirty, calloused, bunioned, rough, tan, pale, long, short, knobby…

Things Feet Do (and other words/phrases to describe those actions)
Run: hurry, race, dash, dart, flee, hustle, jog, scramble, scurry, scamper
Walk: amble, meander, ramble, saunter, step, stride, hike, lumber, pace, plod, roam, shamble, shuffle, stroll, strut, toddle, tramp
Tiptoe: whisper, sneak, steal, patter, pad

Key Emotions and Related Foot Gestures:
Anger: stamp, kick, run, stomp, crush, hammer, pound, trudge
Worry: shuffle, nudge, scuff…

Clichés to Avoid: two left feet, tripping over one’s own feet, clown feet, feet like boats

HINT: When describing any part of the body, try to use cues that show the reader more than just a physical description. Make your descriptions do double duty. Example: Dicey saw the woman the moment the woman saw her. The woman sat on the bottom of some steps facing out, over more fields (only these had crops growing in them) and the distant dull green of marsh grass. She wore a shapeless blouse over a long, shapeless skirt. Her feet were bare and caked with earthy dirt. (Homecoming, Cynthia Voigt)

BONUS TIP: The Color, Texture, and Shape Thesaurus might help you find a fresh take on some of the descriptors listed above! 

Describe your character’s features in a way that reveals more than just a physical description. Show what he looks like while also reinforcing his personality and emotional state, thereby doing more with less.

Need concrete examples of how to describe your character in a compelling, magnetic way? Good news! This thesaurus has been integrated into our online library at One Stop For Writers. There, you can find help with metaphors and similes, as well as the best ways to describe your character using movement. The entire Physical Feature collection is cross-referenced and linked for easy navigation. If you’re interested in seeing a free sampling of the updated Physical Feature Thesaurus and our other descriptive collections, head on over and register at One Stop!

ANGELA ACKERMAN
ANGELA ACKERMAN

Angela is a writing coach, international speaker, and bestselling author who loves to travel, teach, empower writers, and pay-it-forward. She also is a founder of One Stop For Writers, a portal to powerful, innovative tools to help writers elevate their storytelling.

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  1. Tambrey Granneman says

    March 15, 2015 at 4:32 pm

    I’m sorry. “Earthy dirt” ? That doesn’t make sense.
    The thesaurus itself is great though!

    • BECCA PUGLISI says

      March 16, 2015 at 2:37 pm

      It might be a little redundant, lol. But who am I to argue with a Newbery Award winner? 🙂

  2. Liton says

    January 17, 2013 at 10:23 am

    Lovely post. Wonder full blog. Thanks for sharing…..Dr. Luis Fandos

  3. Melissa Sugar says

    November 3, 2012 at 3:31 am

    I love this new thesaurus. I love how you have given examples of action verbs showing what the feet do. This is a bonus in addition to the physical descriptions.

  4. lbdiamond says

    October 17, 2012 at 2:02 pm

    LOVING these posts!

  5. Kelly Gathman says

    October 15, 2012 at 11:23 pm

    I write privately and I had to bookmark this! Only a select few read my stories. Been writing since I was 9-10 yrs old–Im almost 42 now. 🙂 Thank u for this! It’s very helpful.

  6. LTM says

    October 15, 2012 at 5:29 pm

    LOL! omg, y’all, I was thinking, “Not FEET! bleah!” But then I kept reading, and you’re so right. Stomping, slapping, barefoot, old shoes. Feet convey a LOT!

    Great post~ <3

  7. Heather says

    October 14, 2012 at 7:57 pm

    I love the idea of conveying emotion through the feet. Taking notes!

  8. Susanne Drazic says

    October 14, 2012 at 5:40 am

    Another great post. These thesauruses are so helpful. Thanks!

  9. Louise Behiel says

    October 13, 2012 at 7:51 pm

    amazing thesaurus. wow

  10. Tracy Campbell says

    October 13, 2012 at 6:47 pm

    I’m eating this up!

  11. Becca Puglisi says

    October 13, 2012 at 3:02 pm

    This entry is in dedicated to my husband, who has the weirdest feet ever. He’s truly a testament to how even the most “normal” of body parts can be made unique :).

  12. Martha Ramirez says

    October 13, 2012 at 11:54 am

    Thank you for this!!!

  13. Michelle Gregory says

    October 13, 2012 at 9:55 am

    leave it to you ladies to come up with another thesaurus. 🙂

  14. Linda A. says

    October 13, 2012 at 7:27 am

    This post reminds me of a student who is still wearing flip flops to school even though it’s “frost on the pumpkin” season. I might not would have thought to add such a detail about him without your focus on feet. See how you spark readers imaginations?

  15. Natalie Aguirre says

    October 13, 2012 at 7:22 am

    This is great. Thanks so much.

  16. Aimee Katherine says

    October 13, 2012 at 4:43 am

    I love this!

  17. Traci Kenworth says

    October 13, 2012 at 4:30 am

    Love this new thesaurus!! It helps us go beyond the ordinary!!

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