Physical description of a character can be difficult to convey—too much will slow the pace or feel ‘list-like’, while too little will not allow readers to form a clear mental image. If a reader cannot imagine what your character looks like, they may have trouble connecting with them on a personal level, or caring about their plight.
One way to balance the showing and telling of physical description is to showcase a few details that really help ‘tell the story’ about who your character is and what they’ve been through up to this point. Think about what makes them different and interesting. Can a unique feature, clothing choice or way they carry themselves help to hint at their personality? Also, consider how they move their body. Using movement will naturally show a character’s physical characteristics, keep the pace flowing and help to convey their emotions.
Chins: double or triple, flabby, fleshy, undercut, recessed, pointy, sharp, cleft, dimpled…
Jaws: clenched, wide, square, wired shut, clicking, creaking, sore…
Things Chins Do: jut, gesture, point, lift, lower, quiver, tremble
Things Jaws Do: drop open, clench, break, lock, slide back and forth, pop or crack,
Key Emotions and Related Gestures:
- Anger: grinding teeth that result in a clenched jaw and “hard” chin; muscles jumping near the chin or jawline, tendons standing out; a chin that looks stronger or more prominent due to jutting out
- Fear: chattering teeth due to a…
Clichés to Avoid: elfin chins; glass jaws; a weak chin as a sign of a weasely, skeevy character
HINT: When describing any part of the body, try to use cues that show the reader more than just a physical description. Make your descriptions do double duty. Example: Hank leaned back in his chair, hands laced lightly over his torso, considering me. I couldn’t look at his eyes, too scared to see his decision there, so I stared at his chin—dimpled and pale as a baby’s bottom. But with the tiniest jerk, his goons would turn me into a bloody smear. I looked at the floor instead.
BONUS TIP: The Color, Texture, and Shape Thesaurus might help you find a fresh take on some of the descriptors listed above!
Describe your character’s features in a way that reveals more than just a physical description. Show what he looks like while also reinforcing his personality and emotional state, thereby doing more with less.
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