Physical Feature Thesaurus Entry: Chins and Jaws

Physical description of a character can be difficult to convey—too much will slow the pace or feel ‘list-like’, while too little will not allow readers to form a clear mental image. If a reader cannot imagine what your character looks like, they may have trouble connecting with them on a personal level, or caring about their plight. 

One way to balance the showing and telling of physical description is to showcase a few details that really help ‘tell the story’ about who your character is and what they’ve been through up to this point. Think about what makes them different and interesting. Can a unique feature, clothing choice or way they carry themselves help to hint at their personality? Also, consider how they move their body. Using movement will naturally show a character’s physical characteristics, keep the pace flowing and help to convey their emotions.

Descriptors:
Chins: double or triple, flabby, fleshy, undercut, recessed, pointy, sharp, cleft, dimpled…
Jaws: clenched, wide, square, wired shut, clicking, creaking, sore…

Things Chins Do: jut, gesture, point, lift, lower, quiver, tremble

Things Jaws Do: drop open, clench, break, lock, slide back and forth, pop or crack,

Key Emotions and Related Gestures: 

  • Anger: grinding teeth that result in a clenched jaw and “hard” chin; muscles jumping near the chin or jawline, tendons standing out; a chin that looks stronger or more prominent due to jutting out
  • Fear: chattering teeth due to a…

Clichés to Avoid: elfin chins; glass jaws; a weak chin as a sign of a weasely, skeevy character

HINT: When describing any part of the body, try to use cues that show the reader more than just a physical description. Make your descriptions do double duty. Example: Hank leaned back in his chair, hands laced lightly over his torso, considering me. I couldn’t look at his eyes, too scared to see his decision there, so I stared at his chin—dimpled and pale as a baby’s bottom. But with the tiniest jerk, his goons would turn me into a bloody smear. I looked at the floor instead.

BONUS TIP: The Color, Texture, and Shape Thesaurus might help you find a fresh take on some of the descriptors listed above! 

Describe your character’s features in a way that reveals more than just a physical description. Show what he looks like while also reinforcing his personality and emotional state, thereby doing more with less.

Need concrete examples of how to describe your character in a compelling, magnetic way? Good news! This thesaurus has been integrated into our online library at One Stop For Writers. There, you can find help with metaphors and similes, as well as the best ways to describe your character using movement. The entire Physical Feature collection is cross-referenced and linked for easy navigation. If you’re interested in seeing a free sampling of the updated Physical Feature Thesaurus and our other descriptive collections, head on over and register at One Stop!

About BECCA PUGLISI

Becca Puglisi is an international speaker, writing coach, and bestselling author of The Emotion Thesaurus and its sequels. Her books are available in five languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. She is passionate about learning and sharing her knowledge with others through her Writers Helping Writers blog and via One Stop For Writers—a powerhouse online library created to help writers elevate their storytelling. You can find Becca online at both of these spots, as well as on Facebook and Twitter.
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13 Responses to Physical Feature Thesaurus Entry: Chins and Jaws

  1. You guys are so awesome! Thanks for all of the great descriptions. 🙂

  2. Another awesome entry! The chin is so much more expressive than we often give it credit for.

  3. Great Advice! Characters are so important and the more work you do on them, the more it adds to the overall effectiveness of your manuscript.

  4. This is another excellent and helpful descriptive post. It just so happens, I needed a frightening facial description for my NaNo writing tonight and this was most helpfu. l am typing this on my Kindle so please excuse the errors. I’m not used to typing on it.

  5. This is another excellent and helpful descriptive post. It just so happens, I needed a frightening facial description for my NaNo writing tonight and this was most helpfu. l am typing this on my Kindle so please excuse the errors. I’m not used to typing on it.

  6. cleemckenzie says:

    Wish I were doing NaNo this year. I’d love to win your book. However, here’s an idea . . . I buy it instead. Sounds like a plan to me.

    As always you give great tips for writers.

    Thanks.

  7. Thanks for letting me know, Becca.
    I’m glad you have the info on your blog though. It certainly helps. 🙂

  8. Lenny Lee* says:

    hi miss becca! wow! another cool post for body parts. for sure it gonna help me with my writing. i was thinking a jaw dropping open could be like surprise or not believing something or shocked or saying hun? i cant wait til this book get out. i already been using the emotion thesaurus you sent me for my birthday and its helping me lots.
    …hugs to you and miss angela from lenny

  9. Thanks so much for this one, Becca!

  10. Tracy, so glad you’re liking the new thesaurus. We’re already working on our next thesaurus, so I’m afraid the wait for this one will be pretty long ;).

  11. Weird, I just typed a comment, but it didn’t take, so I’m trying again.
    I had said, “I won’t entry as I have your Emotion Thesaurus and I love it!
    When can I purchase the Physical Thesaurus?”
    Have a wonderful weekend, Becca and Angela if you’re reading! 🙂
    Tracy

  12. A good detail to consider!!

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