When you’re writing a character, it’s important to know why she is the way she is. Knowing her backstory is important to achieving this end, and one of the most impactful pieces of a character’s backstory is her emotional wound. This negative experience from the past is so intense that a character will go to great lengths to avoid experiencing that kind of pain and negative emotion again. As a result, certain behaviors, beliefs, and character traits will emerge.
Characters, like real people, are unique, and will respond to wounding events differently. The vast array of possible emotional wounds combined with each character’s personality gives you many options in terms of how your character will turn out. With the right amount of exploration, you should be able to come up with a character whose past appropriately affects her present, resulting in a realistic character that will ring true with readers. Understanding what wounds a protagonist bears will also help you plot out her arc, creating a compelling journey of change that will satisfy readers.
NOTE: We realize that sometimes a wound we profile may have personal meaning, stirring up the past for some of our readers. It is not our intent to create emotional turmoil. Please know that we research each wounding topic carefully to treat it with the utmost respect.
We hope the sample list of ideas below will help you see how emotional trauma will influence your character’s behavior and mindset. For the full entry of this and over 100 other emotional wounds, check into our bestselling resource, The Emotional Wound Thesaurus: A Writer’s Guide to Character Expression.
Definition: to attack unexpectedly, often with intent to rob
Basic Needs Often Compromised By This Wound: safety and security, esteem and recognition, self-actualization
False Beliefs That May Be Embraced As a Result of This Wound:
- I must be weak—an easy target.
- If I’m vigilant, I can keep this from happening again.
- I will never feel safe again…
Positive Attributes That May Result: alert, appreciative, cautious, disciplined, observant, private
Negative Traits That May Result: addictive, confrontational, cynical, hostile, humorless, inhibited, irrational, martyr, needy, nervous, paranoid, reckless, suspicious…
Resulting Fears:
- Fear of the dark
- Fear of being alone
- Fear of becoming a victim again…
Possible Habits That May Emerge:
- Not venturing out after dark
- Never going anywhere alone
- Avoiding the place where the mugging occurred
- Frequent panic or anxiety attacks
- Becoming over-protective with loved ones…
TIP: If you need help understanding the impact of these factors, please read our introductory post on the Emotional Wound Thesaurus. For our current list of Emotional Wound Entries, go here. And for a boatload of practical information on how to incorporate wounds into your story, see our collection of posts on this topic.
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Which emotional wounds are haunting your characters?
Emotional wounds are incredibly formative, changing how a character views the world, causing trust issues, damaging their self-worth, dictating how they will interact with other people, and making it harder for them to achieve their goals. As such, understanding your character’s wound is vitally important to your overall story.
To learn more, we recommend The Emotional Wound Thesaurus. This writing guide explores emotional trauma and what it will look like for your character and their journey in the story. It highlights 120+ possible wounding events and helps you brainstorm how each might play out in your story so you can write your character’s behaviors, attitudes, fears, and insecurities with authenticity.
Becca Puglisi is an international speaker, writing coach, and bestselling author of The Emotion Thesaurus and its sequels. Her books are available in five languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. She is passionate about learning and sharing her knowledge with others through her Writers Helping Writers blog and via One Stop For Writers—a powerhouse online library created to help writers elevate their storytelling.
jeffo says
I felt it important to note that I was assaulted at a subway station while leaving work many years ago. In the immediate aftermath, while I was waiting for the ambulance, the overriding feeling was confusion: Why me? What did I do to deserve that? (It was a simple assault, not even a robbery attempt) When I returned to work it took me quite some time before I was able to use the same subway stop, and even then, I experience racing heart, anxiety, etc., while approaching it.
BECCA PUGLISI says
Isn’t it amazing that in the aftermath of a traumatic event we always wonder what we did wrong or what we could have done differently to keep it from happening? When in 99% of those circumstances, there was absolutely nothing we could have done. I’m going to add some of your responses to this entry. Thanks for sharing your experience, Jeff.
Traci Kenworth says
A scary event, but good background for a character.