This contest is now closed!
Yes, you heard that right! The contest formerly know as Critiques 4U has a new name: Phenomenal First Pages. Nothing else has changed. It’s the same monthly first-page critique contest that you’ve come to know and love, just with more alliteration.
And this month, the wonderful Marissa Graff is back to provide feedback for two lucky winners!
If you’re game to enter this month’s contest, here’s the amazing person you could be working with:
Marissa has been a freelance editor and reader for literary agent Sarah Davies at Greenhouse Literary Agency for five years. In conjunction with Angelella Editorial, she offers developmental editing, author coaching, and more. She specializes in middle-grade and young-adult fiction, but also works with adult fiction. Marissa feels if she’s done her job well, a client should probably never need her help again because she’s given them a crash-course MFA via deep editorial support and/or coaching.
CONTEST GUIDELINES
This month’s contest will be a little different because Marissa is offering up a critique on the FIRST FIVE PAGES of TWO WINNERS’ stories!
If you’re working on a story opening (anything except erotica, nonfiction, or picture books) and would like some objective feedback, please leave a comment. Any comment :). As long as the email address associated with your WordPress account/comment profile is up-to-date, Marissa will be able to contact you if you win. Just please know that if she’s unable to get in touch with you through that address, you’ll have to forfeit your win.
Please be sure your story opening is ready to go so she can critique it before next month’s contest rolls around. If it needs some work and you won’t be able to get it to her right away, let me ask that you plan on entering the next contest once any necessary tweaking has been taken care of.
Two commenters’ names will be randomly drawn and posted here tomorrow. If you win, Marissa will be in contact to get your pages and offer her feedback.
Best of luck!
Becca Puglisi is an international speaker, writing coach, and bestselling author of The Emotion Thesaurus and its sequels. Her books are available in five languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. She is passionate about learning and sharing her knowledge with others through her Writers Helping Writers blog and via One Stop For Writers—a powerhouse online library created to help writers elevate their storytelling.
Ane Ryan Walker says
This is one terrific service you offer. The 1st page s often the most difficult.
Marissa Graff says
Congratulations to the winners! I am beyond thrilled to read your fabulous first five pages 🙂 Thanks to everyone who so kindly entered!
BECCA PUGLISI says
Ok! The lucky winners this time around are Mona Alvarado Frazier and Angelica Steward. Marissa will be in touch with you two soon. Thanks so much for entering, everyone. We’ll see you next month!
Jessica says
Fingers crossed! Great contest 🙂
Angelica Steward says
Would love additional eyes on my WIP.
Jacquie Biggar says
It would be wonderful to get this sort of hands-on direction, thank you!
Taylor Newman says
Hoping there’s still time to enter. I’m wrapping up the first draft of my book (70K words) and would really love critiques on the first five pages.
Anna Hughes says
Love this opportunity! Feedback from someone with your professional background would be fantastic. (:
Samantha Buckley says
I would love a critique of my contemporary YA. Thank you WHR and Marissa for your generosity and ALL the info you continue sharing with us.
Kelly Epperson says
This is amazing! I hope I win! Thank you for doing this contest.
Kelly says
Sounds fantastic!! Thanks.
Anita Banks says
How exciting!
Katherine Smits says
I would love to win a first pages critique!
Liz Charnes says
Awesome new name! I’m working on a new fantasy/sci-fi piece and would love a critique. Thank you so much!
Ger Morrissey says
Fab opportunity
Mike Emminger says
Thrilled to have something you might like to read.
Catherine Misener says
What an opportunity to see if you’re able to hook readers. I’m in!
Jessica Fortin says
Sounds like a great idea! I wish everyone the best. Thanks for joining us Marissa Graff!
Amber says
I love the new name!
Mona AlvaradoFrazier says
The first pages are so hard to get right so getting eyes on them is a great opportunity.
Patricia Bradley says
This sounds great! Love the contest!
Charlene Mertz says
Je suis ici–not Je suis sushi
Richard Gibney says
Almost 50,000 words into a real-world thriller of sorts, and I’d love to get some feedback!
Sara Beth Williams says
This is fantastic. I’m in! Sara Sar
Sarah Mohler says
I just made some tweaks to my first chapter of my YA historical dystopia, The Silence Between the Notes, and would love to get Marissa’s feedback!
Gifford MacShane says
Thanks so much for this offer!
Fritzie von Jessen says
I’d love to get feedback on my first five pages. What a great opportunity. Thanks.
Amber Polo says
What a generous opportunity! Thanks.
Rita Monette says
Do I need a WordPress account to enter?
Tracy Perkins says
Love the new name! I would love an opportunity for Marissa to read my first five pages.
Olusola Akinwale says
The opening sentence, paragraph and page set the tone for a story. Most literary agents ask for the first five pages of a manuscript. It is, therefore, import that the pages are well polished to engage readers. This is one gift Marissa has offered us. Thank you for your benevolence.
Olusola Akinwale says
* It is, therefore, important that the pages are well polished to engage readers. Was I sleep-typing when I wrote import instead of important. Perhaps, it is indirectly giving credence to my desire to have Marissa work on my opening pages.
Darlene Foster says
The new name is great! I would be delighted if I won a critique by Marissa. Thanks.
Tracey Brown says
Love the new name! A critique of the first five pages of my manuscript by Marissa would be great. Thank you for the opportunity!
Catherine Hendrix says
Hi Becca! I’ve been working really hard on the second draft of my manuscript, an epic fantasy called The Searing Sands. I would be so happy and grateful if you’d consider me for a critique. Thanks so much.
Karla Diaz says
By the way, I love the new name!
Karla Diaz says
What an amazing opportunity I wouldn’t want to miss! Ladies, you are awesome.
Jessica Swafford says
I’m in! 😊
Paula Cappa says
Great, I’m in. Working on a novel at about 20,000 words now. Thank you for all you do for writers!! Paula
Joy V Spicer says
Like the new name, sounds more inspiring 🙂
Good luck to everyone who’s entering the contest!