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Colors, Textures and Shape Entry: Smooth

December 10, 2009

Colors, Textures and Shape Entry: Smooth

December 10, 2009

Natural: Skin of an apple/eggplant/watermelon Leaves River-tumbled pebbles Pearls Rose petals Shark fin… Man-made: Paper Freshly shaved skin Metal Plastic Sterling silver Gold wedding band… Synonyms: polished, flowing, sleek, flat, flush,…

Setting Thesaurus Entry: Old Abandoned Mine

December 5, 2009

Setting Thesaurus Entry: Old Abandoned Mine

December 5, 2009

For a reader to relate to the story’s action, they need a physical anchor to tie the characters to. But it can be difficult, finding the right words to convey…

Colors, Textures and Shape Entry: Stripe

December 3, 2009

Colors, Textures and Shape Entry: Stripe

December 3, 2009

Real World Comparisons: Nature: Rainbows Zebras Tigers Raccoon Tail Skunk Stripe ball python… Man Made: Layer cake Candy Cane Barber Pole Hazard signs Hair highlights Racing stripe on cars… Synonyms…

Colors, Textures and Shape Entry: Heart

November 25, 2009

Colors, Textures and Shape Entry: Heart

November 25, 2009

Natural: Heart Bleeding Heart blooms Clover leaves Strawberries Galešnjak, a heart-shaped island in Croatia Calla Lily… Man-made: Valentine’s chocolates Paper valentines Heart locket Jewelry Decorative waffles Cookie cutter… Synonyms: none Describing…

Colors, Textures and Shape Entry: Squishy

November 21, 2009

Colors, Textures and Shape Entry: Squishy

November 21, 2009

Natural: Mud Wet clay Ripe bananas/pears/peaches/grapes Cellulite Wet snow Cheeks Hugs Liver/organs Fat Rare/raw meat Sea onions Raw fish Clams/oysters Slugs Mushrooms Fresh sap beads Egg yolk Raisins, dates, prunes…

Setting Thesaurus Entry: Teen Bedroom Closet

November 14, 2009

Setting Thesaurus Entry: Teen Bedroom Closet

November 14, 2009

Sight Clothing on hangers, laundry hamper, pile of rumpled clothing, orphaned socks, shoes lined up in a row or thrown together in a jumble, shelving, coats, books, board games, stuffed…

Color Thesaurus Entry: Transparent

November 4, 2009

Color Thesaurus Entry: Transparent

November 4, 2009

Real World Comparisons: Natural: Clean rivers, streams, lakes Dew drops Rain drops Melted snow Ice Jellyfish… Man Made: Glass lenses Pool water Glass Suran wrap Ziplock bags Plastic slip covers……

Shape Thesaurus: Spiral

October 29, 2009

Shape Thesaurus: Spiral

October 29, 2009

Natural: Vines, creepers Falling leaves DNA strands Sea shells Tornadoes Fiddle heads… Man-made: Old phone cords Bed springs Perms Rotini pasta Energy saving light bulbs Cinnamon buns… Synonyms: helix, coil, corkscerw,…

Setting Thesaurus Entry: Attic

October 24, 2009

Setting Thesaurus Entry: Attic

October 24, 2009

Sight insulation, exposed wooden beams, pipes, wiring, exhaust fan, porthole window, cracks showing light, airflow tubing, mice/rat/small animal feces, bugs, spiderwebs, dirty floors, dust, boxes, barrels, trunks, old furniture, broken…

Colors, Textures and Shapes: Crusty

October 22, 2009

Colors, Textures and Shapes: Crusty

October 22, 2009

Natural: Scabs Dried sea foam Lime Dried Tears Tree bark Water scale… Man-made: Meringue Buns Scones Over gelled hair Bread Pastries… Synonyms: flaky, crispy, brittle, well baked, scabby… Describing texture…