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5 Important Ways to Use Symbolism in Your Story

July 28, 2014 by BECCA PUGLISI

So many elements go into a truly good book. When we turn that final page with a satisfying sigh, it’s often hard to identify just what made it a success. But many times, symbolism is one of the things that ties the whole work together. Done sloppily, it’s heavy-handed and forced, and turns the reader off. And when it’s done well, symbolism is one of those elements that the reader doesn’t notice; they just recognize that everything worked. It’s an important element, but really hard to do well. That’s why I’m glad to have K.M. Weiland here today.

Symbolism is just one element that she tightens the focus on in her latest release: Jane Eyre: Writer’s Digest Annotated Classics. I had the pleasure of reading this arc, and it was so incredibly interesting, seeing a classic analyzed to see what made it a success. It frankly would have scared the poo out of me, being the one to pick apart such an iconic, well-known novel, but Katie totally nailed it. So rather than blather on, I’ll just turn things over to the expert ;).

Symbolism can sometimes be a tough concept for authors to get their heads around. How do we come up with the right symbols in the first place? What should they be symbolic of? And how do we incorporate them into our stories without making them so obvious we lose all their symbolic value?

Symbolism offers one of the richest opportunities for writers to deepen their themes, past just the conscious appreciation of the readers and right into their emotional and subconscious cores. That’s a lot of power right there. And we’d be crazy to leave it on the table.

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Charlotte Brontë’s classic masterpiece Jane Eyre (which I analyze in-depth in my book Jane Eyre: The Writer’s Digest Annotated Classic) is a wealth of symbolism. You want to know how to do it right? All you have to do is learn at Brontë’s feet. Following are five methods of symbolism she used to enhance every aspect of her story—and which you can use too!

Symbolism Type #1: Small Details

You can include symbolism in even the smallest of your story’s details. The colors your characters wear. The movies they watch. The pictures they use to decorate their apartments. All of these details offer the opportunity for symbolic resonance.

In the first chapter of Brontë’s story, Jane Eyre is reading a book called Bewick’s History of British Birds, which features significantly bleak and desolate descriptions of the English landscape. On the surface, these descriptions have no connection to Jane’s world—except that, of course, they do. Brontë could just as easily have given Jane a cheery romance to read. Instead, she used the bleak descriptions to symbolize Jane’s bleak life as an orphan living with her cruel aunt.

Symbolism Type #2: Motifs

A motif is a repeated design. In a story, a motif is an element repeated throughout the narrative, often to obvious effect. Sometimes, however, it will be used in a less conspicuous way that infiltrates the readers’ subconscious with a web of symbolic cohesion.

The concept of orphanhood is prominent throughout Jane Eyre, most notably in the main character’s own status as a loveless orphan. Indeed, the concept of love and what people have to do to earn it is central to the entire story. Brontë reinforces the obvious aspects of this motif time and again throughout the story. Consider just a few examples:

  • Early on, a servant sings a song about an orphan girl.
  • Adele, the child Jane is hired to look after, is ostensibly an orphan.
  • When Jane encounters the Rivers family, late in the story, she discovers they are newly orphaned themselves, after the death of their father.

Brontë never draws attention to the motif by directly comparing these examples to Jane’s own orphaned state. Rather, she simply allows their presence in the story to reinforce the overall effect.

Symbolism Type #3: Metaphors

Motifs can also be metaphors. Indeed, some of the best symbols in literature are visual metaphors for thematic elements. You may choose to use fire to represent a character with a hot temper. Running water may become a symbol for purification. Illness might represent sin or corruption.

The main metaphoric motif in Jane Eyre is that of birds as symbols for captivity and freedom. Brontë uses the bird metaphor throughout the story to symbolize the relativity of every character and setting in relation to this fundamental theme. Small, plain birds such as sparrows represent Jane. Birds of prey refer to Rochester. And Thornfield—Rochester’s prison and Jane’s sanctuary—is frequently described in terms of a bird’s cage.

Often, strong metaphoric language will emerge naturally while writing a story. In the rewriting, see if you can identify any recurring motifs that crop up. Can you strengthen them to better represent your theme? Try to figure out ways to use different aspects of the same motif to describe varying characters.

Symbolism Type #4: Universal Symbols

Some symbols are ingrained so deeply in our social psyche that they are used in practically every story. The power of these symbols lies in the fact that they will already have been accepted deep into your readers’ subconscious minds. (Their potential weakness, of course, is that their very prevalence can make them seem like clichés.)

Weather is a particularly good example. Thunderstorms are often used as the background for a character’s defeat—or as a contrast to a seeming victory. When Jane accepts Rochester’s proposal, the lightning that strikes a tree in the garden isn’t just a random happening. It’s a portent of the dark revelations that will soon sunder their love.

Symbolism Type #5: Hidden Symbolism

Some types of symbolism will be so deeply buried within your story that your readers may not recognize them at all. Obviously, the value of hidden symbolism is significantly less than that of other types. After all, what good is something if the reader never notices it?

For example, Rochester’s horse is named Mesrour. Very few readers will catch the significance of this: Mesrour is the name of the executioner in Arabian Nights.

Why name the horse this at all? Why not Blackie? Or even O Beauteous One? For starters, both of the latter names would have been a poor use of our Symbolism Type #1. “Mesrour,” even without explanation, enhances the already dark and mysterious tone of the novel. And for those readers who do catch the obscure reference, the symbolism will only be that much stronger.

Symbolism is a delicate dance. But authors can’t afford to overlook it. When choreographed correctly, it can spell the difference between a three-star novel and a five-star novel. Just ask Jane!

K.M. Weiland

K.M. Weiland lives in make-believe worlds, talks to imaginary friends, and survives primarily on chocolate truffles and espresso. She is the IPPY and NIEA Award-winning and internationally published author of the Amazon bestsellers Outlining Your Novel and Structuring Your Novel. She writes historical and speculative fiction from her home in western Nebraska and mentors authors on her award-winning website Helping Writers Become Authors.

Looking to Enhance Your Story’s Theme or Find the Perfect Symbols and Motifs?

The Theme and Symbolism Thesaurus at our sister site, One Stop for Writers contains lists of symbols that match common themes, helping you find the best symbols that can reinforce the idea, emotion, or subject you’re wishing to showcase in a scene.

We also have helpful tutorials and tip sheets on Theme, Symbolism, and Motifs at the site, too. Come test drive the free trial. Writing can be easier!

BECCA PUGLISI
BECCA PUGLISI

Becca Puglisi is an international speaker, writing coach, and bestselling author of The Emotion Thesaurus and its sequels. Her books are available in five languages, are sourced by US universities, and are used by novelists, screenwriters, editors, and psychologists around the world. She is passionate about learning and sharing her knowledge with others through her Writers Helping Writers blog and via One Stop For Writers—a powerhouse online library created to help writers elevate their storytelling.

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  1. Sarah Richards says

    January 12, 2020 at 8:38 pm

    I am trying to weave symbolism into my Southern Gothic horror short story for Fiction Writing class, and this helped give me an idea how. Thank you for sharing.

    • BECCA PUGLISI says

      January 13, 2020 at 1:27 pm

      Oh, I’m so glad! Good luck with your story 🙂

  2. Jenn T says

    September 24, 2019 at 9:35 am

    I just used this to finish a class assignment and it helped so much! thank you

  3. Matthew says

    July 18, 2017 at 1:53 pm

    This isnt all symbolism. for instance reading a bleak book is character defining, but not symbolism.

  4. April says

    June 2, 2017 at 9:15 am

    If i’m going to make a symbol for my novel, is it better in simple symbol like harry potter’s or animal’s symbol like hunger games?

  5. Shreet says

    April 26, 2016 at 4:12 am

    Should the symbolics be used to depict the exact current occurences or can I use them to help readers predict the upcoming, not to depict the immediate?

    • K.M. Weiland says

      April 26, 2016 at 3:38 pm

      You can use symbolism for both, but it’s great for foreshadowing.

  6. amza says

    November 3, 2015 at 10:12 am

    Thanks for sharing,
    it’s very helpfull for me to get done my assigment….
    if you do not mind, please make an article about how to use symbolism to analyze a poetry….
    thank you

  7. Traci Kenworth says

    September 19, 2014 at 5:33 pm

    I’m learning to do this in my own works, thanks to this writing book!!

    • K.M. Weiland says

      September 19, 2014 at 8:02 pm

      So glad you’re finding it useful, Traci!

  8. Annie McMahon says

    August 11, 2014 at 11:41 am

    Great article! Jane Eyre is one of my favorite classics. And symbolism is such an interesting topic! Something to keep in mind when I write my next novel.

    • K.M. Weiland says

      August 11, 2014 at 1:11 pm

      Jane Eyre is one of the greats when it comes to symbolism!

  9. Bruce Louis Dodson says

    August 1, 2014 at 7:11 pm

    This was well said. Succinct.

    • K.M. Weiland says

      August 2, 2014 at 2:06 pm

      Thanks, Bruce! Glad you enjoyed the piece.

  10. Bess says

    July 29, 2014 at 11:54 pm

    Thank you for this great insight on symbolism. I was strong in English in school and remember how much emphasis was put on symbolism , including having to write papers that require the use of it and other literary devices. It’s often too easy to neglect such things as this. Thank you for much needed reminders such as this!

    • K.M. Weiland says

      July 30, 2014 at 12:30 pm

      It’s also one of those things that be difficult to identify, since it is necessarily so subtle within context. Sometimes it can be tough to get our brains around a conscious application of something the reader will need to ingest subconsciously.

  11. :Donna Marie says

    July 28, 2014 at 9:32 pm

    OOOPS! I thanked Becca instead of K.M.! Sorry! Thank you, K. M. 😀

    • BECCA PUGLISI says

      July 29, 2014 at 9:57 am

      Dangit. I totally wanted the credit for this one…

      • K.M. Weiland says

        July 29, 2014 at 12:54 pm

        Hah. :p

      • :Donna Marie says

        July 29, 2014 at 4:40 pm

        thanks for the giggle, Becca 😀

  12. :Donna Marie says

    July 28, 2014 at 9:31 pm

    Oh, Becca, I am SO big on symbolism and plan to use a LOT of it in my novels. Have also used it in a storybook in an effective way, I think. LOVE this! Thank you 😀

    • K.M. Weiland says

      July 29, 2014 at 12:54 pm

      Good for you! Effective symbolism can take a story from acceptable to something special.

  13. ANGELA ACKERMAN says

    July 28, 2014 at 5:32 pm

    I’m going to echo Becca–I LOVED your annotated Jane Eyre. Well, I love all your books, haha, but this one I felt was made for me because I struggle to “see the technique” sometimes because I get sucked into good writing so easily. A great learning tool for all writers.

    This is a great breakdown of symbolism too! I think symbolism are the light layers of fabric that keep the reader immersed in the story. Often they don’t consciously see the symbolism, but their minds recognize it from their filter of experience. It’s a good lesson that we don’t have to point red arrows to the symbols for the readers to get it, and often it does just naturally happen. 🙂

    • K.M. Weiland says

      July 28, 2014 at 5:49 pm

      So glad you enjoyed the book! I think the whole idea of annotating books specifically writers is genius (I can say that because the editors at Writer’s Digest get all the credit for coming up with it :p ). I’m personally itching to get my hands on the next installment in the series, which will be Dracula annotated by Mort Castle due out later next month.

      • ANGELA ACKERMAN says

        July 28, 2014 at 5:55 pm

        Yes I saw that on their website–it will be another great learning opportunity for sure! 🙂

  14. Lucinda W. says

    July 28, 2014 at 5:06 pm

    Excellent article, Katie. I’ll be able to apply this during rewrites. The symbolism I have right now is misdirected. And I need to get this book for sure.

    • K.M. Weiland says

      July 28, 2014 at 5:47 pm

      But at least you’ve already got the symbolism going – and know where it needs to go!

  15. Sarah D'Anne says

    July 28, 2014 at 1:43 pm

    I love symbolism. Every character name I choose, I choose because of its meaning. Colors too. One of my characters has green eyes, which represents Shakespear’s “green eyed monster.” He doesn’t show his jelousy right away, but it is mentioned in the beginning, kind of foreshadowing later events (also, green meaning envy).

    • K.M. Weiland says

      July 28, 2014 at 3:08 pm

      It surprises me sometimes when I give a character a random name, then go look up the meaning and discover how perfectly it fits the character.

  16. Angela Brown says

    July 28, 2014 at 1:09 pm

    Thanks for this excellent breakdown of the ways to use symbolism. I agree that when symblolism is used effectively in a novel, it adds to the enjoyment of the story.

    • K.M. Weiland says

      July 28, 2014 at 3:08 pm

      Symbolism is one of those hidden elements that we don’t consciously miss if it’s not there. But it makes the whole experience so much richer when it is.

  17. John Hamilton says

    July 28, 2014 at 12:25 pm

    Nicely put, Katie. Symbolism is so effective in good fiction (especially when it’s not heavy-handed).

    • K.M. Weiland says

      July 28, 2014 at 1:21 pm

      Really, the key is that *can’t* be heavy-handed. If readers who aren’t even looking for the symbolism notice it, then it loses all of its subconscious punch.

  18. K.M. Weiland says

    July 28, 2014 at 11:54 am

    Thanks so much for having me today, ladies! And thanks for the kind words about the book, Becca. So glad you enjoyed it! It kinda scared the poo out of me too. 😉

  19. Sara L. says

    July 28, 2014 at 9:13 am

    Wow! Such a well-written article, K.M. “Jane Eyre” is one of my all-time favorite novels, but I never picked up on the symbolism you pointed out here. It makes me want to re-read the book again. 🙂 Thank you for sharing your insights!

    • K.M. Weiland says

      July 28, 2014 at 1:21 pm

      The best symbolism is what you *don’t* pick up on. It needs to flow so seamlessly within the story that it’s never a hiccup on the reader’s conscious mind.

  20. Mark Dark says

    July 28, 2014 at 9:06 am

    Thanks for this excellent article. I do, however, challenge the idea that hidden symbolism isn’t as powerful as more obvious symbolism. If symbols exist under the surface of the language maybe they penetrate our souls under the surface of our consciousness – which arguably has a deeper and more profound effect?

    • K.M. Weiland says

      July 28, 2014 at 1:23 pm

      Hidden symbolism’s value is only less if the reader is totally unaware of the significance. For those who have no idea what “Mesrour” means and have never seen the name before, it’s probably not going to mean much, even subconsciously. But otherwise, I totally agree. The power of symbolism is always in its subtlety.

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