Good news, wonderful
writerly people…it’s time for our monthly Phenomenal First Pages contest, where we help transform your story’s opening from good to great!

If you need a bit of help with your opening, today’s the day to enter for a chance to win professional feedback! (We’ve had past winners tell us they’ve found their dream editors through this contest, and even ended up with offers of representation!)

This contest is closed. Please try again next month. If you’d like to be notified when the next one goes live, consider subscribing to the blog (in the sidebar).

Five winners will receive feedback on their first 3 pages and blurb!

Entering is easy. All you need to do is leave your contact information on this entry form (or click the graphic below). If you are a winner, we’ll notify you and explain how to send us your pages and blurb.

How Do You Write an Amazing Book Blurb?

Writing a strong book blurb is important–whether it’s for the back of your book or to entice an agent or editor to read your query.

Here are several helpful posts:
How to Craft a Top-Notch Blurb
Back Cover Copy Formula
Blurbs that Bore, Blurbs that Blare

Contest Details

  • This is a 24-hour contest, so enter ASAP.
  • Make sure your contact information on the entry form is correct.
  • Five winners will be drawn. We will email you if you win and let you know how to submit your first 3 pages and blurb.
  • Please have your pages ready in case your name is selected. Format with 1-inch margins, double-spaced, and 12pt Times New Roman font. 

The editor you’ll be working with: Erica Converso

I’m Erica Converso, author of the Five Stones Pentalogy (affiliate link). I love chocolate, animals, anime, musicals, and lots and lots of books – though not necessarily in that order. In addition to my work as an author, I have been an intern at Marvel Comics, a college essay tutor, and a database and emerging technologies librarian. Between helping adult patrons in the reference section and mentoring teens in the evening reading programs, I was also the resident research expert for anyone requiring more in-depth information for a project.

As an editor, I aim to improve and polish your work to a professional level, while also teaching you to hone your craft and learn from previous mistakes. With every piece I edit, I see the author as both client and student. I believe that every manuscript presents an opportunity to grow as a writer, and a good editor should teach you about your strengths and weaknesses so that you can return to your writing more confident in your skills. Visit my website astrioncreative.com for more information on my books and editing and coaching services.

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Good luck, everyone. We can’t wait to see who wins!

PS: To amp up your first page, grab our  First Pages checklist from One Stop for Writers. For more help with story opening elements, visit this Mother Lode of First Page Resources.


Mindy Weiss

Mindy Alyse Weiss is a glitter-loving kid at heart and serves as WHW’s Administrator. When she’s not keeping things organized around here, she’s writing middle-grade novels, picture books, and mentoring writers through PBParty chats, draft challenges, and annual contests. (Mindy also does picture book critiques, too!) She is represented by Joyce Sweeney at The Seymour Agency.

2 Comments.

  • Congratulations to the winners! I can’t wait to see what you send me!

  • MINDY ALYSE WEISS
    September 19, 2025 6:05 am

    A huge thank you to everyone who stopped by to enter our contest. We had 142 entries! Here are the five lucky winners:

    Susan Shapiro
    Becky Appleby
    Tracy Sue Gimpel
    Caroline Lavoie
    Ben Cochrane

    Congrats! I’ll e-mail instructions for sending me your first three pages and book blurb. 🙂

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