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GE: Setting Thesaurus Entry: Barn Part 2 (Dairy)

June 27, 2009

GE: Setting Thesaurus Entry: Barn Part 2 (Dairy)

June 27, 2009

The information for this entry came from our friend Joyce Servidio, which was nice, since neither Angela nor I have much experience with dairy farms. Thanks for the info, Joyce!…

Colors, Textures and Shapes Entry: Barbed and Spined

June 25, 2009

Colors, Textures and Shapes Entry: Barbed and Spined

June 25, 2009

Natural: Claws Talons Beaks (owl, eagle, falcon) Thorns (raspberry bush, rose bush, blackberries bush, brambles) Cactus Cockle burr… Man-made: Barbed wire fences (ranches, farms, prisons, mine fields, government areas) Decorative…

Setting Thesaurus Entry: Tree House

June 20, 2009

Setting Thesaurus Entry: Tree House

June 20, 2009

Sights wooden planks, cut-out window, rope ladder, boards nailed to tree trunk to make a ladder, chipped/mismatched dishes, ratty furniture, carpet remnants, curtains, junk food wrappers, crumbs, books/magazines, legs dangling…

Colors, Textures and Shapes Entry: Sticky

June 18, 2009

Colors, Textures and Shapes Entry: Sticky

June 18, 2009

Natural: Honey Sap Pitch Spider webs Burrs Snail or slug goo… Man-made: Pull taffy Glue Paper mache Bread dough Biscuit dough Cinnamon buns… Synonyms: gummy, viscid, gluey, viscous, gooey, adhesive, tacky,…

Setting Thesaurus Entry: Prison Cell

June 13, 2009

Setting Thesaurus Entry: Prison Cell

June 13, 2009

Sight Iron bars, cement, thin mattresses, old sheets, plain blankets, toilet, sink, stuff written/carved into the walls, painted cement floor, prison overalls, prison shoes, prison clothing and incidentals, a few…

Colors, Textures and Shapes Entry: Black

June 11, 2009

Colors, Textures and Shapes Entry: Black

June 11, 2009

Real World Comparisons Raven or crow’s wing Bird’s eye Pupil Volcanic rock Dirt/soil Crow Animal’s nose Tire Pepper Darkness Night Dried poop Burnt wood Ashes Oil Tar Leopard’s spots Zebra’s…

Setting Thesaurus Entry: Pond

June 6, 2009

Setting Thesaurus Entry: Pond

June 6, 2009

Sight leaves floating on water, lilly pads, water lillies, frogs, tadpoles, thrush, reeds, long grass, reeds, mud, algae, rocks, pebbles, willows, clover, moss, swirling water, air bubbles drifting up, water…

Colors, Textures and Shapes Entry: Rectangle

June 4, 2009

Colors, Textures and Shapes Entry: Rectangle

June 4, 2009

Natural: No true rectangles in nature Man-made: Brick Magazines Rooms of a house Windows Curtains Books Computer/TV monitors Filing cabinets TV trays Paper Postcards Mattresses Bathroom mirrors Rugs… Synonyms: quadrangle,…

Setting Description Entry: Barn

May 30, 2009

Setting Description Entry: Barn

May 30, 2009

Sight Hay, stalls, water trough or bucket, food trough, pens, seed, grain, blue salt lick, curry comb, tools (shovel, pitchfork, broom) feed buckets, flies, spiders, spider webs, dust, rusty nails,…

Colors, Textures and Shapes Entry: Fuzzy

May 28, 2009

Colors, Textures and Shapes Entry: Fuzzy

May 28, 2009

Rabbits Kittens Puppies Llamas Hamsters Ducklings… Man-made: Stuffed animals Blankets Sweaters Mittens Hats Scarves… Synonyms: downy, frizzy, furry, hairy, pilate, wooly… Describing texture in a story creates intimacy between reader…