·A delayed response
·A head tilt and pause
·A noncommittal answer: Maybe, or We’ll see
·Flapping your hand at someone, dismissing them or their idea
·A quick widening of the eyes, either at the person proposing the idea or to another person involved
·Rubbing the back of the neck without making eye contact
·Biting or chewing on the lip
·Hmming and Hawing
·A purposeful shiver or shudder
·A heavy sigh
·A jutting chin
·A dark, silent look…
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