What does your character want? This is an important question to answer because it determines what your protagonist hopes to achieve by the story’s end. If the goal, or outer motivation, is written well, readers will identify fairly quickly what the overall story goal’s going to be and they’ll know what to root for. But how do you know what outer motivation to choose?
If you read enough books, you’ll see the same goals being used for different characters in new scenarios. Through this thesaurus, we’d like to explore these common outer motivations so you can see your options and what those goals might look like on a deeper level.
Character’s Goal (Outer Motivation): Coming to grips with mental illness
Forms This Might Take: Coming to grips with one’s mental illness diagnosis can be a long and painful process. Many times, the illness cannot be fully overcome. …
- Bipolar disorder
- Anxiety disorders
Human Need Driving the Goal (Inner Motivation): Mental illness can impact a person’s life and their basic needs in so many ways. It can hurt relationships, making it difficult for the person to find love and belonging. The accompanying roadblocks and limitations can…
How the Character May Prepare for This Goal:
- Studying the illness to better educate oneself
- Seeking therapy
- Creating a schedule for medications and sticking to it
- Seeing things in the long-term rather than the short-term and making decisions accordingly (e.g., going to a party though one would rather stay home because one realizes getting out and socializing is a good idea)
Possible Sacrifices or Costs Associated With This Goal:
- Giving up one’s free-spiritedness or individuality in favor of a more traditional lifestyle
- Having to live with side effects from medication (fuzziness, lack of drive, sexual dysfunction, etc.)
Roadblocks Which Could Prevent This Goal from Being Achieved:
- Denial; refusing or being unwilling to see the need for change
- One’s own mind working as an enemy, convincing one that things are fine as they are
- Unhealthy influencers who encourage one not to change
- Low self-esteem that causes self-doubt and negative thought patterns, making
- Recurring set-backs that thwart one’s attempts to get better
Talents & Skills That Will Help the Character Achieve This Goal:
Possible Fallout For the Protagonist if This Goal Is Not Met:
- Broken relationships due to one burning bridges with others
- Never being able to achieve self-fulfillment due to one chasing impossible dreams
- Homelessness and isolation
- Health issues arising from living a prolonged unsafe lifestyle
Clichés to Avoid:
- True love as the cure for one’s mental illness
Click here for a list of our current entries for this thesaurus, along with a master post containing information on the individual fields.
What does your character want more than anything else and what is he willing to do to achieve it?
On the surface, the protagonist’s goal seems to be the most important, but the inner motivation driving your character toward this goal, despite pain, suffering, fear, setbacks, and sacrifice is what really draws readers in.
Understanding the four cornerstones of character arc (Inner Motivation, Outer Motivation, Inner Conflict & Outer Conflict) and how they frame a story is paramount for today’s writers. To help with this, we have integrated our popular Character Motivation Thesaurus into our online library at One Stop For Writers.
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